I am going to like this story. Even if the chapters are short.

IMHO he did not need to redeem himself. She kicked him out. Yeah he was not perfect in his marriage. They should have worked on that together instead of Bella kicking him out. IMHO She is more to blame.

Are these guys adults or still in high school? It's not like they have a family or anything (sarcasm at it's fullest) I hope this "misunderstanding" and lack of "communication" does not last long.

I really did enjoy this story once they got their act together. Thank you for sharing

I'm finding this so frustrating grrrr

Your recommendation of "One More Night" makes me NOT want to read any more of your recommendations/favorites.

I'm guessing (hoping) you're just pimping all the stories of your friends/colleagues/cohorts in this drabble war. Because "One MOre Night" was awful. The women tolerant of cheating boyfriends. Having them get tattooed as a punishment/reminder of the relationships they're SUPPOSED to be in while they're cheating. Bella doesn't want him, but wants to mark him. Edward gets marked, but immediately breaks up with her. I'm HAPPY they weren't together at the end of that story. That's the only good, logical part: the fact that they're NOT together at the end. Because who wants the hero to be a cheater who's not sorry he cheated?

If that's your idea of a great story, then I'll ignore any more of your recs.

Really...it's like you're playing with me. Nope twil, you're not broken enough, I need you more broken before I'll fix you. So mean. Love it. ;)

Oh my goodness, that did not go as I thought. I feel like throwing up little slices of my heart too. :( Make me better. Fix Bella. We all know E has the only "magic wand" that will help! ;)

That "You have always been mine, all of this is mine, was mine...why?" about killed me. I should have reviewed before now, but I have to tell you I'm loving this drabble and these two and how much they love each other and their kids and their families.

Hope you will get a chance to finish this story. Thanks

I was kind of surprised how quickly Edward and Bella got back together and how less they discussed their divorce. Also I couldn't quite get the ages of the kids. Otherwise the story was cute.

Thanks. love the story

cute story! thank you for sharing it.

Love this story. It was beautiful & romantic and heartbreaking that these two could not find their way back to each other. Really enjoyed the HEA.

I love the story so far. I understand what Bella is feeling. Sad she had to get a divorce but I guess in a way that made her realize that its a big deal but I was wondering everyones ages. Thanks