This is funny i love this.

I really love this fanfiction.

Hahaha this was funny even the Edolas Natsu Erza moment.

Omigawsh lol! I love this first chapter!

wtfffffff

Hello :) First I would like to say that this story is pretty cool, I've never read a Natsu/Erza story before because I like Nalu but I'm loving your story!
I'll read the rest later because as in right now I have so much homework to do (is going to hard considering how much I want to read your story) anyways good job on this story so far :))

nice idea of including yourself in the story it adds more comedy and I can't help but laugh keep up the good work

*sighs* Redheads? *clicks tongue* It's over... it's all comin' to an end now. You've done it now, releasing an army of Erzas on the world.

Such cruelty.

Sooooooooooooooooo, we're not offa you yet? That's good. Or not, if I'm thinking about the madness you're probably going to bestow on us. Meh, life's not fun without a bit of madness.

WE NEED MADNESS!

Jellal has my blessing for his pebbles, may they grow into fine and strong rocks like their mother... or father, dunno what gender it is... *nods...fatherly*

Your latest catchphrase is really... catchy *winks*

Thou know who I am

Your serpentine friend.

So... an army of red-heads, huh? Wow... what a dream...

MAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAANNNNNNNNNNNN, I really was expecting more... geh... whatever ...

I await the time you will redeem yourself...

Howling God is out.
Peace

Hahaha, marvelous. Dang, I'm cool. XD

*sigh* I told you not to hang out with Sting. Shit like this is always his fault.

Keep on writing, I loved it. Truly amazing. *nods dramatically cause she's epic like that*

Where's all the NaZa action?!

Your Avengers consist of... A blueberry... An eff-mothering vampire, who doesn't sparkles... a shinigami with the most annoying smirk... a gun expert otaku and a mafia boy?

Yup, we're all doomed, especially with Kohta here. Dem guns, dem guns...

Just a funny fact, which you probably know, but Kohta's character is based Hellsing's mangaka. Kinda funny to see a manga/anime character's creator as a manga/anime character himself... in the same story.

So, your 'friends' convinced you to continue writing this? Meh, it's reaching its point, just one chapter to go and I have a slight feeling that it would be something so dastardly and mind-effin... I don't even wanna think about it.

As usual, continue with what you're doing.

Your serpentine friend.

*a panel in the roof lifts and slides off to the side*

...

*down drops a scroll onto the table via a string*

...

*the ceiling panel is replaced*

*the scroll says 'READ ME'*

Seriously? Those fools got you to continue this? I laugh, man, I laugh. Just find it really hilarious for some reason.

So, this is the Avengers you were referring to? Ahaha, I'm just wondering how many more authors are you going to just shove into this mess of yours.

What else, what else... I honestly do not know what else to say. Gah, why can't I think? Has writing fics finally diminished my capacity to remember? Or I could just be stupid... meh, I don't care which it is, honestly.

Oh, hey, I actually do have one more thing to say. I'm not so hopeless after all. Yipee, that's a pat on the back for me. But anymoo, (anymoo?) this whole chaos of words you call a story, just how will it end? I won't explain any more. I'll leave at this.

Aight, see ya later.
Howling God, out.