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NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO EDGE! WHY DID HE HAVE TO DIE?! But finally! Slender is DEAD! Can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the awesome work as always!

Nooooo Edge! Why did he die?! Vector go leave $20 on the grave!

i love this story

Interesting chapter. Who knew bloody Mary can love?

Moose, I know about the bible, watch this, Jesus died so that all men may go to heaven. If you take him into your heart, all is forgiven.
For god so loved the world he gave his only son so that whosoever believeith in him shall never perish but have everlasting life.
HKK

(Don't wanna sound like an Ass) u go to church right...in the bible it states "he shall not kill" So murderers got to hell...other then that ur story is AWESOME

now that was interesting for slendy butt
UPLOAD MORE PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE!

LMAO SILVER!
You just had to touch the bodies...
Please update really soon!

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! I LOVE IT HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
Alicia's in it YAAAAAAAY Vector for calling my OC a bitch...your gonna be purse when I get through with you.
UPLOAD MORE PRETTY PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAZE!

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Epicness is overloading.

That is why I am neeeeeever trying that gig in the mirror!
UPLOAD MORE PRETTY PLEEEEEEEEEEEASE!

To be honest, I was slightly dissapointed, the fight was waaaay to easy, I can't imagine Sonic or Shadow not even putting up a fight, It seems you just killed them.

At least make Sonic look like he's trying to stop your character. At the moment, I'm starting to wonder if he's a Mary-Sue. But I'll hold back.

Lord Kelvin will cover this better :P

Keep up the great writing! :)

Woah!Awesome start! I bet this story's gonna be great and eventful! Please update soon!