I love the Uchibi verse, and this is an awesome story you have made, that would fit right into it!

/Good job.

This is amazing! it was so evil yet so adorable! Thank you for writing it!

OMG this makes me so happy. Also the public service announcement was hilarious.

I love it. Can it be canon for the Uchibi-verse? It would fit so well, though it'd be a bit of background rather than up front like most of the story- a lot of the stuff the kids get up to is.

*cackles*

The Youth Preserve... I'm pretty sure the place is locked in an eternal sunrise which coincidentally always happens to be behind whichever Green Beast is being more youthful at the moment. I might need a Yamanaka mind-wipe after I finish this review. Where does the line form, and which ironclad legal documents will I need to bring? Wait, I'll have to sign other forms to be eligible to receive that information. Never mind. I'll just go buy some Brain Bleach and a Mental Image Shredder and do it myself. Then I'll be imprisoned for three-days-going-on-eternity in a torture genjutsu by the Uchiha police force for bleaching my brain of the need to pay my taxes!

Youth Preserve, that term alone just made my day XD
weaponised Paperwork, it finally happend, such evil!

Awesome.

LOVE IT! SO PERFECT!

ha ha ha, sweeeeeeet. any chance you'd write more in thsi verse continueing this thought

I do like the idea of a youth preserve. Come see youth in its natural habitat.

All hail the evilness of paperwork.

*coos at the adorable* *then runs away not screaming* Screaming would get me caught, or cited for disturbing the peace-

OH. The Uchiha already run the police. Add bureaucracy, and...

[insert shriek of terror at the high end of humanly audible frequencies]

Pretty funny.

AWESOME!

Seriously, this is magnificent comedy! As an accountant in training myself, I recognise that accountancy is a well-greased and very gentle slope down into the pits of pure evil.