| Reviews for Paradox |
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i am mi-chan chapter 10 . 5/25/2015 Awww why'd ya stop. oo |
akai-ringo25 chapter 10 . 8/17/2014 I really liked this story! I hope you update soon. I can't wait to see how Secondo will react when he finds out Xanxus lied (if he ever does) |
rhizz17 chapter 10 . 12/8/2013 Update more story please ;-) |
Nami-chuuu chapter 2 . 8/3/2013 Buenos dias los muchachos? Muchos gracias? Que hermosaaaaa w So cuteeeeeeee x3 (My mother language is spanish) I love your story ( and the drawing of course xD) Im reading this because i saw the drawing on deviantart :3 Sooooo i will be following you ;3 |
ezcap1st chapter 10 . 3/22/2013 Poor varia. Lussuria is so gross... i also love that you're expanding on xanxus, i really like his character! |
69AnimeFreak69 chapter 10 . 3/13/2013 Huhuhu I wonder what will happen now ... |
69AnimeFreak69 chapter 8 . 3/13/2013 Wow... 2 Xanxus... I wonder how many buildings were destroyed ? |
yannieXD chapter 10 . 1/24/2013 how will Ricardo react when he found Xanxus is not the decimo?! there will be scene with enma? where are the other guardians? btw great story! |
Fi Suki Saki chapter 10 . 12/13/2012 AAAARRRGGGHHHH! I THOUGHT I THOUGHT I TOUGHT GGGRRRRRR! I THOUGHT THIC CHAP WILL TELL THAT TSUNA IS DECIMO! BUT THIS IS JUST 'FLASHBACK'! DDX Ah well... nevermind! and OH! If Ricardo is Giotto's cousin, that's mean Giotto still alive in Ricardo's world right? WHY I FORGOT THIS?! *gloomy* Btw, just Tsuna who arrived there on Secondo's time? where's Tsuna's guardians? UPDATE FAST PLEASE! But I'm kinda afraid if Ricardo will know the truth of who is Decimo! Though maybe he should not really surprise with the fact how alike is Tsuna with Giotto! |
Esperanz chapter 10 . 12/13/2012 NOOOO TSUNA again, again you only make the re-appearance at the END of the chapter! I'm going to cry...well not really but i may or may not be glaring at the screen. But I really wonder how the problem of Xanxus not actually being decimo will be solved...the vongola ring...maybe? does tsuna have more flames or is his reduced even more after not going to the right time period? and Tsuna going to this time period still makes me wonder that i f primo is still alive at this exact same time, will he remember tsuna or is it only in the time period that tsuna traveled to that they acatully met, and...i'm mixing my own head up...sigh oh well, I look forward to the next chapter with TSUNA in it, and not some other traveling group, I really hoped Tsuna would make an appearance that is not re-capped but oh well, I DO respect your life and time, and I wond't complain too much about the lack of updates, as long as you're not lazing around when you could be writing the continuation of this awesome and actually very hilarious story! PLEAAASSSSEEE!update soon! |
Naiah94 chapter 10 . 12/13/2012 Haha great job on this so far, so thoroughly amusing through the whole chapter. You captured Xanxus and Lussuria perfectly in the chapter. Was laughing through it all of it 3 |
Fi Suki Saki chapter 9 . 11/19/2012 Ugh... that's an awkward moment when secondo mistaken Xanxus as Decimo JUST BECAUSE THEY'RE LOOK ALIKE or because Lussuria's story? Ah, will you really make something for Enma? Btw, I'm curious if Tsuna meet the 3nd boss(ignore the secondo) 'till the 9th boss(younger version because old Nono still alive right?!). Because Tsuna at the first glance is look weak, and he still a child, and he look like 1st generation! XD Ah wait, where's Tsuna? where's the other guardians of Varia? btw, good thing that Xanxus not with Levi, but Lussuria! well... Luss-nee(?) more mature than everyone in Varia, maybe, other than Squalo. UPDATE AGAIN PLEASE SOON! X3 hyu |
Esperanz chapter 9 . 11/18/2012 EEEHH where is Tsuna?! Rather, when Tsuna shows up, I don't know if he is going to let out the info of him being Decimo or not, but if he does...what in the world is Secondo, who thinks Xanxus is the tenth, going to say about that? Don't tell me it's going to start another fight! the poor vongola mansion! I don't know how Dino and Hibari will react to that, either. I hope they don't meet Spade in secondo's time, he would have already betrayed primo then... Too bad for Xanxus ending up with Lussuria of all people. Also If secondo knows what Primo looks like will he also mistake Tsuna for primo's hidden child or something...now that Tsuna has met primo, if he meets him again in secondo's time, would primo know him, I wonder. Because time would have passed from the changing of one boss to another, so if lets say 5 years past after tsuna left primo but tsuna only entered secondo's time 5 seconds after he left primo's time, that in itself would be a paradox I'm getting dizzy from all that thinking and trying to type it down so it makes sense. |
Fi Suki Saki chapter 8 . 11/4/2012 Tsuna wear boy clothes RIGHT!? Ah, and this one still not end? Ohh... actually I'm REALLY hoping that Enma with Cozart! puuu too bad that didn't happen. So, where they go? still in the very long past? XD HOPE SO! update? |
Soul of The World chapter 8 . 11/3/2012 3rd time read it, still squealing like a girl (and I am one). Hahaha, I am sooo going to look at the other's reaction to this chapter! |