Vivid description. I feel like I might be in need of a shower... and it was PG!

:)(: A beautiful, beautiful extension to such a wonderful scene.
It really adds that extra 'umph.:)(:

Beautiful! You write them so well!

Very well written! It really does add something to the scene. Thanks!

So well written! Great description used. And so freaking cute! Loved it:)

That was hot, and I LOVE Jessica!

Great fic! Thank you

I loved this look at what was going on inside of them during this beautiful moment. The depth of feeling between them, their sheer NEED for each other is just beautiful, and you've presented it so wonderfully. It was easy to get as enthralled reading about the kiss as they were sharing it :)

Haha, I love Jess's reaction in that episode and the kiss was smoldering. The extended version here just makes it even better.

Awww, this was a great extension of that scene. : )

awesome :D

Oh, wow. This is amazing. Absolute perfection.

Hope you give us more Tamela treats. :)

that was great