Mom voice indeed

Hmmmm, who could that be?

Wow! What a fantastically deep story! I'm so glad I found it and can't wait to read more!

I am late coming to this story but thoroughly enjoying it! SO happy to see you updating it again and can NOT wait for the continuation of the story. Thank you so much for a very interesting, exceptional story!

This is one of the most emotionally raw & gut wrenching stories I’ve EVER read! I literally feel nauseas from Savannah’s games and Jasper’s suffering because it’s just so real that you can’t help but feel every ounce of that agony. This story is dark and hopeful, painful and difficult to predict. It’s AMAZING! You have a gift and I really hope you return to it one day.

Wow. Just...wow! It doesn’t seem possible but this keeps getting better and better. I am bouncing out of my seat wanting to experience what happens next. Thank you for writing this!

I'm really excited you are jumping back into this. I can't wait to see Bella and Jasper finally spending more time together and how will Jasper feel about what Bella is and what is following her. I noticed that you were looking for a pre reader... I hope you found one. I am more than happy to pre read a chapter but I have to warn I am not great at feedback other than I like the flow or this point is great or so on. Either way it's all great since I did just reread the whole thing and now am so excited for more :)

There’s a lot to love in this chapter, but Emmett blurting our that they’re vampires at the end is just awesome.

Ahhhahahahahahahaha! I get it!

And damn, what a chapter! Wow!

I am hoping that Bella tells the Jasperthe Cullens what she really is?

I love this story

Warning: possible spoiler alert!

This story is AMAZING! I do have a question, however. How come Bella is not noticing their lack of heart beat? She has noticed biological changes in others with her enhanced powers so why not notice a lack of heartbeat?

I’m just curious. As I said this story is amazing and I am so excited to see what happens next!

Okay, sheeet. What was it that Savannah came there for but never told him?
And how far away is he going to have to go to get to Maria? Bella figures it was because “the Cullens” were potentially in danger that she couldn’t go far when she tried to leave. And we know she’s gone a ways a away before, but...
also? What did savannah not tell him?

Well thank goodness he reacted... was that just the bond breaking again, or was it the god of war coming out? I’m thinking the latter?

Huh. So Savannah’s apparent attraction to, fascination with, Bella... is that the effect of the fake bond she’s formed with Jasper? And is that bond also the reason the ache in Bella’s chest had faded somewhat in Savannah’s presence?