Whens da next chapter

Love this story! Please keep it up! Now to answer your questions, Naruto is cuter as a girl, as seen when he does his sexy jutsu in the anime, and Baruto gave us a female Sasuke in the form w Sarada.

Why did you have to bring out guns. That instantly kills this story, he’s already a master at the Bow he does not need guns they are in a primitive world compared to the avengers they make no sense. RIP

Well then, this is a super different take on an avengers cross

Natalya would be disappointed in him sleeping in such an open area where anyone could have killed him.

where is the next chapter of this story please let me know

I write this review not for the chapter but for the honesty that you have shown in your last AN(may be because it matches my own :P)

I just finished chapter 15 and the way your writing his little brother is awesome. My first thought was he’s not a spoiled little mother fucker. A lot of these kinds of story’s have his siblings be assholes so I’m glad he’s not.

Wait... weren't they gonna sell the info about Suna to Konoha for a debt owed? If they just help out in the invasion Konoha wouldn't owe them a thing. They can just say Kumo acted out of self defense...

Naruto says he 'wouldnt endanger anyone's life, not even if it meant his own' to explain why he won't kill a clearly hostile shinobi. What about those random Suna shinobi he killed just because they were doing their job inside their own damn village? I feel likr Naruto isn't very consistent in his beliefs, behaviour and motivations.

Does Naruto have no self control at all? First he promises Yugito to keep her safe forerver and five sentences later he's going to attack the Hokage in the middle of his own village? How is this fool team leader. Even canon Naruto has more restraint.
I'm mostly enjoying your story but this kind of behaviour is just ridiculous.

Is Naruto's team partaking in the exams as a 5 man team? Are the other teams also 5 man teams or just the regular 3 man teams? If they're the only 5 man team that seems a bit unfair. :P

It seems a bit counterintuitive for Naruto to be a shinobi and on a team with his girlfriends if he's so attached to the both of them that he can't even trust them to take care of themselves. He's shown pretty poor leadership skills putting his entire team in danger just to save his girlfriend. It's not that the decision couldn't have been justified. It just seems very selfish in this case. he also said something weird to Yugito. Telling her he would not allow her to be in danger because she was his achilles heel I think? Why even bring her then? What's the point of bringing someone you only think of as your weakness.

The story so far is original and somewhat interesting but I don't think Naruto should be on a team with Samui and Yugito if he can't handle it . Especially not as team leader.
I'll keep reading and see what happens. cheers.

Okay story.

You need to face reality author dude and snap out of your stupidity tantrum. Majority believe that what you are facing or feeling deep inside of you reflects on your work. So if your having a problem in your family then sort it out properly instead of being selfish since the world doesn't revolves around you. So chill author dude.