This is such a great story, but the Thorki part just made me super uncomfortable and I suddenly felt a need to get a drink, they're suppost to be brothers, so let them be brothers.

this was nice but screw the thorki scene

Oh my goodness the writing is phenomenal! I swear I almost cried. You are an amazing writer. Simply and awesomely amazing

Beautiful!

Anyone who thinks that Loki deserves anything less than ABSOLUTE softness and compassion is an ignorant, hypocritical, barbaric thug. It wasn't "softer than he deserves". That's his BROTHER, therefore, there is no such thing as "too soft".

Learn how compassion works. It's hypocritical and poisonous to mimic a lack of compassion in response to lack of compassion .

SO sweet!

Very well written and truly heartbreaking. Thanks for sharing!

I LUV IT!Will u continue it?

I really love this story. Hope you write more of it.

I loved this so so so much! Man, was written so lovely, and could just feel all of Loki's pain and sadness! And Thor waiting to talk with Loki, so cute! Love it!

that was so wonderful.
I think lokis punishment is so cruel but the way you wrote it had a kind of happy ending,.. I still cried tears..
I love loki

Geez I really do love your Thorki stories. You are an Arthur/Eames master and I still reread many of those stories regularly but I really like how you portray Thor and Loki. The painful yet sweet love the two brothers have for each other in each of your stories feels realistic and I enjoy that immensely. I did cry a bit when I read this, especially when Loki's last words were the answer to Thor's question. Perfect heart-wrenching timing lol.

P.S. I'm sorry to hear about the stupid bint who reported you. I want to read your stuff on that new site you mentioned but I think there's a waiting listing to join. Either way I look forward to reading more of your stuff and I agree you shouldn't have to censor your craft. Keep it up!

i love the fic!
TT_TT it was really cute the last part!
please make a continue in which they can speak again!
well... XD
bye bye

I really enjoyed reading this story.

Loved this story!