Reviews for The Tangled Web of Fate
GJAM chapter 2 . 9/23/2015
Please update :)
genesicgaogaigarvsgodgundam chapter 2 . 5/11/2015
cool
spiderman1fan chapter 2 . 2/25/2015
this is amazing story can't wait for more. poor spidey seems like he can catch a break anywhere in 616 or any parallel dimension. i hope you update soon.
Evil reviewer chapter 2 . 1/31/2015
**Jabs with a stick till you update this.**
genesicgaogaigarvsgodgundam chapter 1 . 12/11/2014
awesome job
DarkDevilKnight chapter 2 . 4/11/2014
While I do like this story so far but what I'm disappointed is the lack of updated chapters, just saying.
themainman chapter 2 . 4/27/2013
i need no must have more. this is the thing fan boys like me jizz themselfs over.
Ravenmore45 chapter 2 . 4/8/2013
I had a question. Is this story abandoned? Please let me know. Thanks.
jaime.evaunit.coronado72 chapter 2 . 1/21/2013
Awesome
kindleflame5 chapter 1 . 11/10/2012
Please update! It's been over a month!
Ranmaleopard chapter 1 . 11/8/2012
this is really awesome and interesting i can't wait to see what happens next please continue!
GreatIceDragon chapter 2 . 10/15/2012
This looks really good! I think you got Spider-man's tone and sarcasm down great!
Todd chapter 2 . 10/8/2012
That was Super!
Will you make more DC,s verisons of Spider-man,s villains?
Maybe you can improve some of them like White rabbit can make Potals aka Rabbit holds.

Well I hope you Update soon.
Rider Paladin chapter 2 . 10/5/2012
Well, that was funny. Poor Ben Reilly. The Spider-Man of DC New York and he still can't get any respect. Glad you mentioned the whole issue of Batman himself not enjoying such good press, but if you're using the animated series as a template, you could have easily applied that to the entire Justice League during the first two seasons of Unlimited, where there was a concentrated effort to tarnish the good name of the League and raise suspicion towards them among normal people. None of them thought the same thing could have been done to Spider-Man? None of them thought, "Hey, let's take this with a grain of salt, since property damage in his fights could have been unfairly pinned on him like on any of us by some media hack with an agenda"?

All the same, I did like the interaction between Spider-Man and Huntress, and their alter egos Ben Reilly and Helena Bertinelli, as well as the bond between Ben and Dr. Parker. Oh, and J.J.'s the same everywhere, isn't he? Oh, well, wouldn't be him otherwise. I'll be looking forward to seeing more of this story, since we don't have nearly enough Ben Reilly fanfics.
Shivasb chapter 2 . 10/5/2012
It really is a good story, and is getting so much interesting that I was forced to creat an account here. The beggining was slow, but so is every other. Buona Fortuna!
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