It was very enjoyable Arkielad

Only Jane can deliver love, passion and protection. Nice.

Loved it!

I think this would make for a great beginning to a multi chapter fic. Jan and Maura could choose to raise the baby as their own. It could be Frank's not Tommy's. Of course we know Frank is to selfish at this point to raise a kid and Lydia is a blond that does not have enough gray batter to raise a kid. I would be perfect.

Amazing intuitive writing. Perfectly pitched and beautifully written. More please...

You write anything with Rizzles in it and I'll read it. And this- I love too.

So... So good... Oh my god - just perfect! Thank you

This is beautiful... Thank you

Yes, very much enjoyed! Even nearly 2yrs after you wrote it. Your ff is just one example of how beautifully the writers of R&I could develope Jane and Maura into a couple on the show. Kudos my friend. Loved some of your other stories too, more to go! Cheers ;))

Yes a bit dramatic yet I loved it!

Beautiful and so tender and gentle and wonderfully articulate. You were so mindful of both of their characters and so true to how you expressed their thoughts and feelings. I was impressed at how you told about their love making in such a romantic way without the usual graphic detail used by others writers that distract from their love for each other . Thank you
Charley

"Sometimes facts are the fairy tale." A beautiful statement that is fitting for this short fairy but thrilling fairy tale. Thanks for another lovely piece of writing.

Looks good to me you're on the right track

*swoons* Perfect :3

fantastic writing