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My boy Vegeta!

Ohhhh I get it. Hatchi is Android 18, right?

My, I have to say that plot was perfectly built and rather terrible. Although it was an AU, you were good at keeping the main personality of each character. Now I have to read the sequel since some questions are still unanswered. Good work.

I'm not so sure about this story.

It is certainly well written so far... But my issue is that none of these characters really bear any resemblance to their canon counterparts except in name, and maaaaybe in the bare bone person X knows person Y kind of thing.

When I come here, I want to read stories about my favorite characters being in different situations, or being slightly different themselves. But this? You basically wrote your "own" story and then slapped on DBZ character names to make people read it.

Totes gnar story bra

I can't help but think, "What's the point of reading OR writing this story?"

It seems like you've changed so many keys parts of canon Gohan and Goku that they are simply different people with the same name. I find it pretty disingenuous that they share names with the originals at all - you've basically come up with your own story with your own characters, and that's good, but then you decided to stick DBZ character names on your characters, which is WEIRD.

However, if I'm wrong in how much you've discarded from te original... Then you should have made it more clear in the first chapter.

Awesome chapter. Awesome story.

I completely didn't expect Gohan to meet up with Chi Chi in the final chapter, wow.

Recounting A/U roles, just as a recap

18- Assassin, killed Goten
Piccolo- Assassin
Goten- Assassin
Goku- Assassin
Videl- Assassin
Frieza- Assassin
Sharpner- Guard
Tien- Guard
Ox King- Senator
Roshi- Conspirator
Vegeta- Assassin
Krillen- Thrift shop owner

There was no Bulma, Chiaotzu, Trunks, or other characters, but the inclusion of Frieza was cool.

I hope the sequel contains more Gohan & Videl romance, maybe a subplot with her as another assassin. I liked her role in this story.

Tien and Gohan becoming friends of sorts was cool. I enjoyed Tien and his role, and Sharpner wasn't bad either.

Excellent story, Shadow.

How in the world did I not see Frieza coming? It's awesome, and I could totally envision this. Wow, this is quite the story.

Gohan avenged Goku by killing Vegeta, and the scene was awesome!

Gohan/Videl moment next chapter? Gohan & Tien better meet again too in the final chapter...

Awesome chapter, Shadow.

So Muten Roshi is dirty, eh? I didn't see that one coming...wow...

Tien is really a star of this story, piecing everything together like it's cake. Gohan and Vegeta did not disappoint, and the name Agent Prince is awesome as well.

All in all, another stunningly amazing chapter. The Tien/Guard fight was well-written and descriptive, and everything in between surprised me and made me happy. Excellent job.

:O

GOHAN VERSUS VEGETA? NO WAY. Tien is super cool in this story, but this Gohan v. Vegeta battle will be the highlight of the story thus far, hands down.

Gohan and Vegeta can both use ki and make this into a war.

What will happen with Videl? Is she safe? I want to know more about her agency.

Great chapter.

Tien and Gohan have met Krillen again! Yes! I still am waiting for the introduction of Yamcha, Bulma, and others to the scene, and the reintroduction of Videl. I love the way this is shaping up with Gohan and Tien tagteaming everything. Will Chi Chi appear?

Where is Sharpner? Did he die?

All in all, another informative and exceptional chapter. You're doing amazing, Shadow!

TIEN AND GOHAN WORKING TOGETHER?! WHAT!? That's amazing! I am so pumped for the conclusion to this story, you've got no clue!

Securities, K Drive is something I noticed immediately..

Hopefully Tien can shed light on what the company actually is.

Excellent job!

Yay, they kissed! The Vegeta thing is confusing me a bit. He works for the same organization as Goku and Goten did..?

Dr. Flappe being dead sucks, but bleh.

I hope Videl does find Gohan, so they can be romantically involved with one another :D

VEGETA! It's about damn time Vegeta entered the fray. I imagine Gohan and Videl will escape unharmed, or at least unharmed in Gohan's case.

If Videl were to die, it'd set off Gohan.

Piccolo, Raditz, just everything about this story is mindfucking me right now.

This story is incredible, Shadow!