NOOO LUCY, NOOO GRAY, F*********K NASTU, and good job author

Well I wish that Gray didn't say that all 3 of them were going to hell (because lucy) but it was good

I liked the Happy ending the best (can't stand sad endings I will legit break into tears, actually I already did but...) Great job on your fiction! It was so interesting, and just great in general. I didn't see many grammatically incorrect sentences or misspell words but I probably wouldn't be able to catch it anyways. Great job once again!

Noooooo Lucy!

Booboo Gray don't believe them it wasn't her fault! Lucy noooo

Don't worry I'm a NaLu shipper and I'm not mad at you at all. It's a fanfiction! Who cares if one character turns evil in one? Or crazy? I ship NaL u but I can't say I hate a good GrayLu fiction (I DO think that GrayLu is a cute couple but I ship NaLu More!)

Kinda disturbing but okay Natsu

Damn Natsu, I feel you bro... Lucy just tell the truth and stay with Gray before he finds out by his Don't let her use you. Author, I LOVE YOUUU

Poor Gray oesn't deserve this ;-;!

Damn just when I thought Natsu was the bad one and I felt bad for lucy they went and flipped it, DAMN LUCY HARSH! poor Natsu-kun ;-;

Great Chapter! And Okay (in this Fiction, not in the actual Anime/Manga) Natsu does not deserve Lucy, If Lucy was really just testing Gray (If not then she doesn't deserve Gray, not yet at least) than for sure he (Natsu) doesn't deserve her, and even if she wasn't just testing Gray and was actually manipulating him Natsu has no right to go back with her since he was the cause of her, excuse me for the language but putting it truthfully; Bitchyness. Anyways I feel her, I feel him (Gray), '

and I kinda feel bad for Natsu but hate him right now
(Dont hate him in the anime/manga, tbh he is legit perfection in one word there. I mean his smile is everything, so i'm just talking about in here)

Thank Goodness Gray finally set her straight. Nice job one the chapter by the way!

Hmmm i don't know how I feel about Lucy character, but I think in this fiction GrayLu should happen! Also imagine how awkward Lucy and Loke would feel when she summoned him to battle lol

(I ship NaLu a bit more than GrayLu tbh, but right here I want it to be GrayLu!)

GrayLu will never be canon this sucks
You should be ashamed you protrayed Lucy as a thot

I liked the happy ending the most. I'm a nalu fan and I was cheering for graylu here! I love how insane this was. Thank you for this bittersweet fic. Keep up the amazing work!