this story is truly beautiful. i’ve reread it over and over again, and i’m reviewing this after finding it again after a couple months. your story has me sitting here in my bed at 3am sobbing my eyes out. thank you so much for creating this masterpiece.

I’m absolutely bawling... her pain makes me so sad. You wrote this so well

why would you make me cry like this

brooo... you didn’t have to break me like that

Great story, super tear jerker. really sad but beautifully written.

WHY DAMMIT

this was so beautiful and well written. i’m crying

does jasper kill himself or live?

Seria mejor que hicieras por favor un secuela y que jasper se suicide a como su verdadera compañera lo hizo al saber q prefirió a esaaaa malice que no es nadaaaaa y que ella pague por eso yo se que el simplemente la olvido pero qie sr acuerde y se suicide para estar con ella su verdadera compañera y noooo alice ella debe quedar sola por el resto de su vida

Beautiful

You broke my heart. The pain ...

I’m at a loss for words. This was so beautiful

Wow amazing! Thank you so much for writing it and sharing.

I liked it. Jasper will never find true happiness with Alice, he’ll be content, but always wondering what could have been; he’ll live in agony for eternity and Alice won’t be able to bring him back.
I feel for Bella... I wished she would have lived, but maybe it wasn’t to be.. but it’s sad, she deserved so much better. Why couldn’t she find happiness with another vampire? Garret could have been a good choice, just like Alistair...

Beautiful story, the ending made me cry