| Reviews for Vacation |
|---|
Katlover98 chapter 1 . 5/18/2019 Ohh, I liked this one. Funny with a reveal that wasn't too angsty |
Eagle Dreamer chapter 1 . 4/4/2016 nice |
Great chapter 1 . 8/24/2015 Tell him when he asks... Ok Looking forward to more! |
Nozomi Higurashi chapter 1 . 8/23/2015 Response to the last line: Just like Aunt May and Gwen Stacy when it comes to Peter Parker. |
NeverTooMuchInspiration chapter 1 . 1/24/2015 Pretty good. Only issue I could find is the minor plot hole of how the same ghost was attacking Danny several times a day when he wouldn't have been able to dump them back in the Zone that quickly. Also, perhaps the implications that the attack amount was typical in Amity Park while several of the normal perpetrators were attacking elsewhere. The reveal was nicely done and suitably dramatic. It was something of the typical fashion of a reveal, trapped unarmed in an attack while others are getting hurt, but with some originality to it. Getting Lancer involved was a nice touch. Thank you for posting! |
LunarCatNinja chapter 1 . 1/8/2015 This is cute. I love reveal stories! So many ways for him to be found out... -w- |
KrystalINSANEGirl chapter 1 . 8/28/2014 great story! :D |
theyoungphoenix chapter 1 . 11/28/2013 Aww... So cute! Loved it! _ |
Gentle-Valera-Fox chapter 1 . 6/9/2013 So that's the Box Ghost's purpose in life, misplaced aggression. XD |
TeddyBear98 chapter 1 . 6/6/2013 Love this! Must have been an awesome/interesting dream lol |
shin obin chapter 1 . 5/23/2013 Make sequel |
ohlookadeadaccount chapter 1 . 1/23/2013 Nice! I love it :) |
HalfafanD chapter 1 . 1/11/2013 You need to put more dialog in your stories and One-Shots. But other than that, this was great! |
Sarah Serena Rose chapter 1 . 1/11/2013 Gah, this was just perfect! Loved, loved, loved it :D A neat idea on how to have Danny reveal his secret and I thought you dealt with his and Maddies reaction to his secret coming out well. |
Priscilla chapter 1 . 11/29/2012 Really good and funny! Keep up the good work! |