| Reviews for The Silver Man |
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   ShadowNinja1011 chapter 23 . 2/27/2014 ** I loved it. GAHHH new favorite ship . You know who I am :P- Sheik |
| OkonoMiyagi chapter 23 . 7/28/2013 You started this story out very well, and I particularly enjoyed the interactions between Oni and Cremia, but you seemed to force the story the longer it went on. The ending left a lot to be desired. What was Shani doing on that beach? Was she ever going to apologize to Cremia? Her presence at the end there is never explained, and a major plot point like that, I feel, shouldn't go unanswered. |
| HalcyonLife chapter 23 . 7/24/2013 Honestly, thank you for finishing this one. It was an enjoyable read. Straightforward, but with it's own charm. |
| Guest chapter 17 . 4/26/2013 "Damn right." BACK IN BLACK! starts playing in the back round |
| Guest chapter 5 . 4/26/2013 In my head I thought : sakon heard a strange voice " FALCO PAWNCH!" fallowed by a force ful punch to his jaw. |
| DragonEye0905 chapter 22 . 1/23/2013 Honestly, I thought that Julian was evil. That's what I thought. But, I guess I was proved wrong. It's a good this that the maskman wasn't there. But...I'm sure he's around here somewhere... Ho ho ho...o.o |
| DragonEye0905 chapter 14 . 1/23/2013 Oh, did I mention that I want to KILL the masksalesman!? AARGH! Kill! Gah! *murders something* ...with my rageful vengance out of the way, good job. Except for the maskman. Well, good job in him too. I just hate him... |
| DragonEye0905 chapter 10 . 1/23/2013 Oh, combined with the sing I,m listening to, I don't know whether to cry out of sadness, or joy that he spoke with her! :D Oh, I want to kill that maskman...not thay he was in this chapter, but I shall kill him nonetheless. |
| DragonEye0905 chapter 5 . 1/23/2013 Ahh! She knows! What will happen now...I can only continue reading... |
| DragonEye0905 chapter 2 . 1/23/2013 Oh, I feel for you Cremia...even though I love Kafei and Anju. The short chapters are cool, I like the feel this story gives off. Also, even though this is only chapetr two, I like the way you've done the characters. Really good! |
| Guest chapter 23 . 1/17/2013 you started out great but it feels like the more you went on the boreder you got. also,you put that many rape scenes in but glossed over the romance between oni and cremia. not gratuitous CONSENSUAL sex scene. not cool man. |
| PhantomMoon312 chapter 22 . 12/27/2012 Awww! I love weddings. :) |
| Chibininjah chapter 5 . 12/21/2012 oh man i was worried that she would be raped good thing Oni saved her |
| Chibininjah chapter 4 . 12/20/2012 Lucky Cremia has Oni drooling all over her |
| PhantomMoon312 chapter 19 . 12/20/2012 When it comes to Zelda, take every logical thing you know and throw it out the window! Love the story, I've always thought Oni Link was the hotter one! :3 Update ASAP |
