This is heartbreaking.. I love it

please have joshua kidnapped and write very soon.

Oh gosh...I just started crying :,) This is a fantastic story, and you've written it so well, I can hear the character's voices in my head.

First of all, wow. The explanation for how the TWEWY people got there is interesting and also really solid. And much as I jest about Joshua... aw c'mon, he needed a hug. Or a Composer-suitable variant thereof.

The descent into angst was epically done- easy to empathise with, justified... the way Joshua stayed IC right up until the very end was just D: Him being in perma-denial was awful, and reading that mental state was... err... cathartic or something.

Then there was the way that everyone tried to help... fron Shiki and her failed hug to Neku's tenacity... I cheered a lot for him when everything broke down.

So the fic was an epic read :) and makes a lot of sense too!

Wow. Just Wow. That is just Sad. And Good Work.

Wow, this is awesome! You're a really good writer.