It was beeeaaauutiful. I don't have a guess, but it would be nice if NCIS stormed the place, I'm kind of obsessed right now haha. *cough*
Anyways. Your writing is so beautiful, and this story line is so original and interesting, I just wanna keep reading. Kinda like the black butler manga, you know, you want to keep on reading even when there's no chapters left. Awesome story, keep the ideas flowing and please update soon :)

I'm wondering what gave you the idea to go in seasons? I really like this, mainly the playfulness displayed by Ciel and the happiness provided by Sebastian. It really is great.

I absolutely love this story. It's really original and interesting, and it's just so awesome. You should leave everything the way it is and UPDATE SOON :)

Thank you for at least telling us your intentions. Many other authors probably wouldn't have bothered.

Anyway, I looked up Dance with the Devil, it's pretty awesome. Good choice! ;D

Good luck on your studies, and well, the story too!

Hmmm..tough choice. If you feel it would make the story better you should rewrite it. It's your baby! I can't wait for whatever you decide!

Oh cool two chapters.

dom rewrite if you feel you are not happy with what you have written-take your time

I can help you if you want...the story is great...and I like the underworld context

I love this! I really do! I can't wait to see if Ciel's father gets what is coming to him! I'm also partially expecting that Ciel does not come out of that encounter unscathed...perhaps...his eye? But I also wanna know just why Vincent hates Sebastian...I can't wait!

eeeeeeeeeep upload!

ciel is playing with fire with sebastian-nut he's use to it

Cool.

I LOVE THIS!
Update soon please!

poor ciel!always bad childhood

A thorough good read with intriguing characters and a cohesive and well thought-out background/ situations. Each character displays qualities that we have come to associate with them but it's with a slightly different twist to them now. Ciel is tenacious, brilliant, and willing to put up with anything as long as it meets his goals. Vincent (though we never really got to see much of him in the anime or manga) comes across as a bit ruthless. This is expected however of one who polices the Underground for the queen. Undertaker still remains the enigmatic figure with his uncanny ability to ferret out information not easily found. All in all, I can't wait to see how Sebastian will fit in. Great job! I'll be looking forward to future updates.