Bella seems to be regressing. I think she was more mature at 16 than she is now!

yikes Bella is so basic

I loved it thank you

Omg what an asshole! Yes she is immature but she doesn’t have to ask permission, she is an adult and he is not her dad. After the no credit card this one is right up manipulative at best.

i tek on this Bella is really immature even for a 18 years old but this Edward is borderline abuser. Kinky spanking is one thing , punishment spanking another thing. That being said they could both be better at communicating

I’m all for Olderward but with this starting out with Bella being 14, it’s weird. And what father would allow their teenage daughter to share a hotel room with a 35 year old man? I understand fiction and creative license but this whole story gave me the heebie-jeebies and don’t get me started on Bella’s attitude, she acted like a 2 year old child! There was no mental maturity as she got older.
This was not my cup of tea at all

Errrr, this is awful. An idiot Bella and a pedo Edward.

Pedo.

But he didn’t believe the love of his life? Unforgivable.

Love It!

ok this story is taking a turn im not sure about. besides the "daddy" stuff you have a great story and the characters are fantastic but this part really eeeks me out

Edward's a controlling, self-centered, asswipe and Bella is a pushover doormat.
Daddy kink is tolerable when it's purely fetish or fulfilling some emotional needs. Not when it's mental abuse. Bullshit.

Loved this story! It was weird seeing James as a good guy, but I like it when he is. I enjoyed how all the characters developed throughout the story as well as the storyline. Wonderful read ;)

Every husband in this world should know that being a full time mom is extremely hard. taking care the kids especially baby is very exhausting, you need lots lots lots of energy. you hardly taking a break bcos your kids needs you like 24/7 literally. a messed up house is nothing than a new mom with baby blues and postpartum deppression. so husband should consider themself lucky to come home to just over tired wife. if they want 24/7 freshly looking wifey, tidy n clean house: GET YOUR WIFE AND KID A FREAKING MAID/HOUSEKEEPER/BABYSITTER YOU SELFIES HUMAN BEING!

I had a great time reading this amazing story. Thank you so much for sharing your incredible talent and imagination with us.