this was incredible. by the angle that was amazing. please do another chapter, and post it soon!

aside from the prequel, you should write more that relates to this one shot :D

Again, absolutely lovely. You have a knack for hitting characters right on the head and I'm drawn in to them and your stories. I look forward to seeing more from you; you are a wonderful writer!

That was very very good. I've no other words to describe it. Far out, the torment for Will. I've not read the books for some months, but just reading that makes me want to read them all over again.

You write extremely well from the point of view of unrequited love. Crapsauce, I don't know what to do with myself. I was going to read another fic, if you had one, but you only seem to have this.

So I beg you, please continue writing - ANYTHING - and post it up. I'll be most happy to read it!

Thank you ever so much for this brilliant piece.

FlyFly

Wow this is so amazing! I love it. Will! You should sooo continue it! please, please, please! It was beautiful!

This is gorgeous. Absolutely gorgeous. Very well written, with few mistakes. You captured Will's vunerable side perfectly. Poor Will, I love him so much. This almost made me cry. Really good work. Favourited.

This was really really good. I mean, seriously! First fic? Hard to tell.
It's really nice:) That was just too great! it was sad that he couldn't wake her and comfort her, though now it makes me want to know what happened in her dream.
Love the last four paragraphs especially:)
Keep on Writing!
Hugs and Chocolate!

*Claps* Fabulous job. I loved it!

Brought tears to my eyes.

Can you please continue this? It was an ABSOLUTLEY amazing fanfiction and I want, no, NEED to see more:)