Heh, this is just too good. Great idea for a short.

Keep the good writing.

Now for some new family advice: Never eat raspberries AND grapes.

Poor Ham, guy just can't win when it comes to his bros.

trying to remove my review, eh? well, you can't stop me easily. this story has no thought put into it, and i am appalled to see you attempt to pass this off as actual writing

terrible chapter! i'm shocked by what i'm seeing here. your writing has really gone down since you began writing, suprsingr. when was the last time you updated? november 2017? your popularity in this fandom has decreased. you can write all you want, but no one is going to read your stuff.

This was pretty nice. Well done.

Keep the good writing.

I enjoyed this. Million Dollar Idea to see these guys in the spotlight for a change. :p

Hey, great job with this one.

Keep the good writing.

Chris is pure love
Amazing as always

What was that?

OMG seriously I have no words that was just simultaneously amazing and yet disturbing. Chris is like what 8?
He wants to be ripped apart? Ok I really hadn't expected that.
Please tell me Chris is not going to get what he thinks he wants because I can't help but think that that would just make everything worse.

Dear Diary...

I like reading other peoples diaries

The End

I need to know wth happened to Pammy in her past! TELLME!

Me esta gustando mucho esta novela, please continúa escribiéndola (to lazy for write in English)

Heh, this is pretty cool.

Keep the good writing.

is it safe to assume that dick is andy's brother? lol. andy dick... monkeyman is the only reason I have ever or would ever have a reason to like andy dick.

Haha lol oh brainy

Aw, poor kid.

Keep the good writing.