| Reviews for The Captive |
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  Guest chapter 15 . 8/26 I've read this twic, years apart but I have. Loved it both times, thank you for sharing this. D Darcy. |
 komodogrey chapter 15 . 4/19/2018 WHAT?! WAAAAAAJHHHHHHJJHHTTTTTTTTTTT? i am just like kaboom. mind. gone. blown away. damn. i have to be honest i did NOT SEE THAT COMING. wow. WoooooOOOWOWWWWWWW so like i usually only read fanfic for the smut but damn did ur story keep me going. like its the first story i have read word for word from beginning to end that kept me on the edge of my seat the whole time. and i have to say truthfully, ur sex scene was honestly a but disappointing but that didnt even matter. Youre story and writing was so incredibly well written and good that i was actually GLAD u didnt drag on the sex scene and just kind of got to fhe point and continued on with ur story instead. i get bored easily, and i tend to drop most fanfics or skip chapters to get to the juicy parts but damn, this was one helluva ride. thanks for this. |
| FetFemme chapter 15 . 4/6/2016 fuck, the ending gets me every time x.x excellently written! |
| FlowerMaiden05 chapter 15 . 3/2/2016 Omg. No lol please write another part to this! |
| Elizabeth.Electrica chapter 15 . 6/20/2015 Just amazing! Marry me! |
| Elizabeth.Electrica chapter 6 . 6/20/2015 You are great! |
| Elizabeth.Electrica chapter 2 . 6/19/2015 Hate submissive female Shepard version, she's a fighter. Thank you for this ! |
| Lunasnoir chapter 15 . 1/8/2015 this is a really good story! your writing is incredile and well paced. I love everymoment of it. Part of me want's more, but more is a mystery! Thanks for the laughs and heartbreaks. |
| BlackRavenD chapter 15 . 3/16/2014 I love AU shakarian 3 This one is a very good one! Congratulations on the story! |
| TheLadyW chapter 15 . 5/25/2013 Action. Adventure. Romance. All good things. Thank you for sharing this wonderful story. |
| DeltaAgent chapter 15 . 1/29/2013 Man, this story was FANTASTIC from beginning to end. You made Nihlus so awesome. And then he died. Fuck. Jantor and Trey were also awesome. And they died too. Fuck again. Your story has a great emotional influence. I liked the weeping trees idea too. That was really creative. P.S. I have an in-progress story that retells some of ME1 with Nihlus surviving Eden Prime, if you're interested. There's also a war-bros style relationship between Male Shep and Garrus. |
| Sazuka57 chapter 15 . 1/25/2013 What WHAT CLIFFHANGER AAAA what happens next! this has been a really, really great fic. my mind was blown by a lot of it. especially the ending. BUT WHAT HAPPENS NEXT?! |
| Dorkolicious chapter 15 . 1/3/2013 What. Whhaaaaatttt ahhhh! You ended it like that lol! I hope you write more. This is pretty awesome for my very first Pre-Reaper War fic, you've set the bar pretty high. Great job! |
| Dorkolicious chapter 14 . 1/3/2013 I can't believe that stupid dung heap killed Nihlus. You made him so very awesome! |
| Dorkolicious chapter 13 . 1/3/2013 And that was sooooo satisfying on so many levels! Bravo |
