| Reviews for Alive And Victorious |
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Guest chapter 21 . 11/23/2017 A good sequel would be she finds out she's pregnant and Gara goes into proactive mode since his mom died in child birth and he's not the most sensitive how could he comfort a baby and would his own child even love him. |
Guest chapter 8 . 8/22/2017 87312540 72814380 |
ElfiieSu chapter 21 . 7/14/2017 Interesting story ! I really like the evolution of Matsuri and Gaara's relationship, it's realistic. I also really liked Matsuri and Kankuro's fight it's well writen. Your writing is clear and neat, it's descriptive but not too much and it's got a realistic touch to it ! |
snowstormjinx chapter 21 . 5/30/2017 I wuv it |
The3rdReader chapter 11 . 3/12/2017 i did indeed come across a gew kinda like that, but i cant for the life of me remember thier names. sorry. i do remember they were rated M, the genres were romance and friendship or family. in one gaara was a girl. in another, it was a threesome between naruto, gaara, and hinata |
LorieLreader chapter 21 . 2/16/2016 You wrote this story a long time ago, so it could be strange for you to still receive reviews. But I just finished your story and it was so good I wanted you to know. It's moving, romantic and while it can appear slow, it's only logical for these two characters. Gaara's past is so horrific, he's very very cautious with people. And he has to learn what is it to be normal with people. You painted his evolution, and Matsuri's, very well. Reading their story was a great pleasure. Thank you so much. |
catznspira chapter 21 . 9/16/2015 I read this story all the way through twice. I would love to read more Gaara and Matsuri stories from you :) please write more! You are very talented. |
Silken Ink chapter 12 . 8/18/2015 Fantastic! So sweet! |
Silken Ink chapter 11 . 8/18/2015 I love it ... Love it! you have captured Gaara so perfectly! I can only hope I do even half as well as you in the second part of my story. This story is definitely providing me with lots of inspiration for his attitude, thank you! |
Guest chapter 3 . 8/17/2015 I loved the part with Gaara's ...ahem self discovery. Very seductive and I believe true to character. |
Silken Ink chapter 2 . 8/17/2015 Very good so far. I'm really enjoying it! Um ... The only thing is ... Well there are some grammar issues that are a little distracting. But I really love the plot and you're right, it is really difficult to find a good matsuri gaara story. |
Queen-Cocaine chapter 21 . 7/28/2015 I loved it! It was everything I hoped for xx |
Lemin V. Thawens chapter 1 . 7/7/2015 Thank you so much! I was about to quit looking for a good romance with Gaara in it. Though I don't see him getting with anyone from his village because of how badly he was treated. However idk maybe the way you have written it I've changed my mind. If you have trouble in the future with names I just google search boy/girl Japanese names. I can't wait to continue reading. |
Hatake Kaisa chapter 21 . 5/31/2015 I love your story! U made gaara sound like gaara! Matsuri sound AWESOME! Love it! |
who.am.I.2000 chapter 1 . 3/15/2015 Wow. Such an awesome beginning! Sure, some grammar errors here and there, but as a foreigner reader and writer too, I completely understand your struggle. :) It's difficult to find good Gaara and Matsuri stories, but they are so cute together! Thank you for posting this wonderful story. |