| Reviews for The Fuiunjutsu Master of Konoha |
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  AnonReviews chapter 4 . 4/23 F.Y.I. 1000 ryo is about 8.25 american dollars. Just thought you might want to know \_( ツ )_/ |
 thegrison chapter 1 . 12/25/2019 No... Just no way can I believe this story. The best of the best of the leaf was genin at 5-7, chunin 7-9, jonin 10-12, Anbu 11-13 and Anbu captain 12-14. They were training since 3-5 to made that by those ages with the help of clans or ninja parents. Then you say Naruto went from no ninja skills to beating Kakashi Hatake in ninjustu (the copycat with over 1000 ninjistu) in a ninjustu battle? I am stopping right there and call bull stink. Good luck in the future. |
| thegrison chapter 13 . 9/21/2019 WOW! So many errors in this story. Just in the first chapter there are so many wrong things. First handseals speed is muscle memory. Something that takes a long time to make like as in months to years of practice. Second has chakra levels are big but 500 clones for hours is not true. 100 clones for an hour sure but not the full day. Third it would take him a month for each of the 5 basic elements and that would be the first stage. Fourth using that many clones has the risk of the nine tails breaking free or to losing control of a clone even if just temporary. Now a big question how a four year old made it to the land of whirlpools? All alone and no food or water after being ran out of his home village. You need a good beta reader to help you. Good luck in the future. |
| Guest chapter 4 . 7/24/2019 Are you so seriously stupid? First, he's now publicly known as a Jonin level Naruto Uzumaki before entering the academy, according to the hokage, under 'another identity' which turns out to be... Naruto Uzumaki. He fucking entered as HIMSELF? Yeah, great plan there genius. So fucking dumb. |
| bananahead1 chapter 2 . 7/13/2019 no im done i cant take it this story is utter trash |
| bananahead1 chapter 1 . 7/13/2019 howd he get ther directions |
| bananahead1 chapter 1 . 7/13/2019 bad place to start |
| R chapter 1 . 6/28/2019 Why the hell is he going BACK to a village that ran him out of town when he was four? He. Was. Four. Thats a sure sign that a good chunk of that place wanted him dead. The concept of fealty to a place that makes your life miserable is retarded. |
| Apple424 chapter 1 . 6/26/2019 This chapter was a lot to fast and I thought he was made too op cause of him wiping the floor with 4 jounin level ninja that destroyed the tension that someone can hurt him but the story is interesting |
| SpikedTankedmaster300 chapter 8 . 6/13/2019 Wait, my bad I misunderstood what happened in the next chapter |
| SpikedTankedmaster300 chapter 9 . 6/13/2019 Wait! Hold on, how was Tsume a virgin if she had kids? |
| Hey chapter 7 . 4/3/2019 There are some problems with your writing. And telling the readers what something is is pretentious. Also, reread your first couple of chapters. You have quite a bit of inconsistencies, you prick. |
| Reft chapter 13 . 3/8/2019 a little fast paced but still a good story so far :) |
| lou2003us chapter 13 . 11/4/2018 I really want to see what happens next. Looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the great work boss! |
| biginferno chapter 13 . 10/30/2018 i enjoyed this but i was shocked that you didn't have Samui in this older harem especially with Tsunade and Mei in this harem |
