Dude, this sounds completely awesome! I know that you're probably not going to continue this but wanted to let you know that the flow was steady and informative while the general atmosphere was the proper amounts of dark but secretive, and the fact that you included Skyfire was amazing. If you ever decide to continue this then you can bet that you'll have a fan ready and waiting.

you must continue this story it'very good one

Okay, I finally worked up the courage to tell you how amazing your story is.

It has a unique setting, great characterization, and intense emotions, the despair in the pit is written very well.

As i already said, the characterization is amazing, Miko is a difficult character to write, as is Skyfire.
You are doing a great job on both, please keep it up and update soon!

Oh, we have Skyfire in this! This is simply fascinating. I am excited for the next chapter.

Good story start. Update soon. Don't care about what Crow Father, the idiot said about Miko! I like Miko and she's very strong and has intuition. :)

Great story and extremely fascinating. Please update soon I can't wait to see what happens next.

nice so far

This is darkly fascinating. Like a train wreck I can't tear my eyes away.
The situation is original among fanfictions.
Grammar and sentence structure are excellent.
Paragraph form is solid.
The plot flows along so well I found myself shocked to arrive at the end and very disappointed fo it to be over. Please don't let this be a one shot!

OOOOOOOOOOOOH! Hopefully Miko breaks out soon. Great story so far. Please update soon! :)

A Skyfire who's not lost somewhere on earth? Thais should be exiciting to read! Yay! Please continue this. Does this Skyfire know Starscream? Was he Starscream's partner like in G1? Did he work for the decepticons like Jetfire in the movies? I can hardly wait to read his backstory and see where you take this story from here.

Now this sounds fascinating. I can't wait to see what you've got planned.
And I recognized Miko right away from her questions. She's perfectly in character, and yet just the perfect degree of scared. How'd you get the idea?

*scream* Oh goodness poor Miko. She gonna need more than resilience I can tell you that! *cringe*

At least it's not Overlord...?