Reviews for Want |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I love this! Yes! Yes! YES! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this! Yes! Yes! YES! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is absolutely spectacular! I could practically feel the emotions and details Kazehaya was feeling wowow! Thank you so so much for writing this :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Enjoyed reading this. Thanks for sharing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Definitely going in my favorites. I believe this truly captures Kazehaya's thoughts and emotions at that moment, but even if he does want to treasure her, I still believe he should have gotten the hint that her deepest desires mirrored his own. She obviously wanted to kiss him on their trip to Okinawa, and it should have been obvious that she was expecting something when she grabbed him and shut her eyes for the second time. But anyway, enough of my rambling. It's a beautifully written fic. that really really gives off a "Kazehaya" feel to it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lovely fic. Going in my favs. |
![]() ![]() excellent writing i really enjoyed it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awwww such a good take on that scene! Love this. 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't know why you haven't gotten more reviews already, because this is bloody brilliant. I absolutely love the way you wrote this; it moved me, and I think it deserves to go up on my favourites list. Thanks for writing such a lovely little fluffy oneshot, I'll be sure to read some more fics from you in the future c: |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this. I love finding out what Kazehaya's thinking. Thanks for the insight! |
![]() ![]() Can't you make it more original? |
![]() ![]() ![]() O.o that was AMAZING |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think you captured Kazehaya's frame of mind here very well. He WANTS to be a gentleman, but he can't always be one. The descriptions here of the kiss were particularly vivid and flowing to read. I consider this story a success. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh don't mind me, that was just the sound of my heart shattering. Nothing to worry about. I'll just be quietly crying in a corner because this fic was so absolutely full of feeling and so very Kazehaya. The words were written so beautifully. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Perfection. Thank you! This is just- I couldn't have written it better. You captured Kazehaya's turmoil, his needs vs his wants, his determination- I think you handled better than the manga in some ways! I enjoyed every second! |