Omgs I listen to the song when I read this so impacting and sad I think I might cry but it was well written good job
Best wishez

NEXT TIME ADD A GOOD ENDING ! I WAS SOBBING MY WAY THOUGHT THIS WHOLE THING

This is a great you could write about how Percy died

awww so sad, I was crying halfway through it. You have a gift, keep writing!

This is a great story!

OMG D: that's so beautiful I'm crying my eyes out its so sad but its amazing ur an awesome writer D': its so sad and so beautiful that words can't even describe... U can't keep this a one shot

GAHHHHHHHHHH!
The FREAKING SADNESS IS KILLING ME BUT I CAN'T SAY ANYTHING BAD BECAUSE THAT WAS BEAUTIFULLLLLLL! (CAPS LOCK FOREVER!) well not really, i just really like your story right here:)

this is sooo good! i felt like i was Annabeth (which means i cried) and oh my gods that song is perfect for this story!
P.S there is no way in Hades you are keeping this a one shot. It's way too good. It has to be longer!

Your awesome keep writing

This song always makes me cry. It's just so beautiful, but so heartbreaking. Good job on your oneshot. It's very well done.

Oh my gods that made me sad. Really good but you should make it longer and not keep it a one-shot.

Oh, gods. Ow. Are you trying to kill me? I haven't read a fic this sad since i read the doctors dog... i think i'll go watch doomsday or something to cheer myself up after this.
Anyways, really good story! great writing style, even if it did make me almost cry... keep writing!