This one's fun too.

This is too much fun. Love the repartee between these two. The scheming and trying to get even. Thank you.

You surprised me with Capt. Denny's sneakiness. I thought he was going to ask Mary to dance himself, but persuading Mr. Collin's to do so was much more entertaining.

I love your Extended series! please update soon!

I love your sequel; I almost wanted Denny to reveal Mr. Bennet's "part" in all this, just to get it all out in the open, but I'm also happy he held his tongue...

Oh gosh, I'm so in love with Mary and Capt Denny. Their interactions are perfect - so wonderfully heated and believable. I especially enjoy their arguments - possibly the most entertaining things I've ever read. You somehow manage to have them discard propriety, but remain decoruss, if that makes any sense. It's such a pleasure to read and I for one would LOVE to read more. *sigh* Love is not a strong enough word. I think you've created a new obsession for me. I need more! Brilliant job!

Love it - really hope you write a follow on to this fic! The banter and confusion between the two of them is fantastic :)

I love it! My only problem with it is that I want more! BTW, that was my subtle way of saying please please turn this into a muti-chapter fic! PLEASE!

Let them fight their way to the altar and the first child and be done with it

YAY! A SEQUEL!

DANG! that was an INTENSE fight! there were both really MEAN! lol.

But they sorta, in some twisted, unapologetic way worked things out in the end.

Miss Howard is a two-face witch.

Very fun, hilarious sequel to the previous fic. I loved it! There must be another one! They have to eventually make out and get married sometime...;)

I really enjoyed this story as well as the one before. Are you going to write more?

This story was so good that I had to go back and read your first "Denny/Mary" story! It seems Denny has met his match! Bravo, you have a wonderful writing talent! I would love to read more P&P stories from you. These two characters are written so wonderfully stubborn and a tad spiteful which makes for great reading! Please continue on with the saga. I have a feeling you could write them directly into matrimony - clawing and scratching like two cats! I will look forward to more! L.

It is intresting to learn more of Mary who was the least known sister in the book. Very nice.

Just one thing. It is Sir William Lucas or Sir William, never Sir Lucas or Lord Lucas.

Really enjoyed it. Love how you have captured Jane Austen's voice so it sounds as if it is a continuation of the story. I can't believe that I am wanting Mary and Denny to get together! It is such a mismatched couple but they are so entertaining. Hope there is another sequal!