Fascinating story. I hope that you continue it. It’s very mysterious and fascinating.

Nice

pretty cool so far.

Yeah. To me it would be great for you to finish this.

Yeah please continue this story. It's doing great.

I'd like you to continue this story as so,e others do as well

Do continue on this storyline. As I do wish to see it finish in some form or another.

May i suggest you make your chapters longer.

good idea, bad format and storytelling try to make a better work of it.

Im sorry for the delay I will be updating shortly

This sounds like it could be a great story, but it's kind of hard to read when it's a giant block of words. Please use the Enter key for paragraphs, but otherwise, great idea for a story!

This is my first fanfic hope hope you like it sorry it was short ill try to update on weekends

Awesome story cant wait for all 4 to meet