I'm a teen, and I like that movie. Rock on tattooed Santa! British Easter bunny! Santa's accent makes pitch black's name sound like a bad word though. Awesome chapter!

I absolutely love your story! It's really good. The characters are realistic and there are few grammatical errors. Please update again soon! Is Dylan going to be in the story?

awe, u havent updated in a while and this was satsfying..contnue my friend. onwards..mush!

omg this is sooo good!

Awesome chapter! It was rly funny in some parts!
Please update soon!

hey i live in Minnesota which is the u.s. version of canada! love it! if i promiss to review again willu update before new years...?!

Guesss whooooooooooo (I didn't feel like logging in)

So I'm texting you right now, fun, fun, fun! Go drink your tea Iroh. This was a good chapter by the way, haha it made me literally 'LOL' cause I'm just that cool. I think Max needs to invest in a shirt and a new sweater...should've gone shopping with us ;) DUDE GET RID OF LISSA I HATE HER WITH A BURNING FIERY PASSION! Man, look at my beautiful description. Makes me tear up :') VAMPIRE FANG *LESSTHANTHREE**LESSTHANTHREE*
GOOOOOOOOOOOD JOB GURL

Update! And srsly? This was wayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy too short. This review is probably longer!

MORE!

Thanks for the update! Much appreciated. I love the "vampire Fang" pun or joke or whatever it is. Keep writing!
Miss Anonymous

Nice job. Nudge & Ella suck. Max should not have had to wear that dress.

more!

Max really is clueless about the evidence, as all good protagonists should be to stretch the plot. Amazing story you have here. I hope the updates, although erratic, are constant. Wouldn't want a tale a good as this to keep me hanging forever.

I am max ride of course! My hair is actually very similar to hers.
Great chap!

Fang is my true love (Heart)
Oh man, this has got to be my favourite chapter yet! So good! Dude.