Amazing story.

This is awesome please continue

Apart from a few minor spelling errors, this is a very addicting story. I do hope that you return your attention to it and finish - there's a lot of potential and a lot more material to work with.

I love this story! Your writing is amazing! It's nice to look back on chapter one then to chapter 7 (hopefully more chapters!) and see how much your writing has improved! GREAT job! : )

Brilliant. I love this story, and am awaiting the next update.

you know that I wait for the sequel! can not wait that the two have the time to clear up completely! your story is wonderful! :D

Aw, sweet kiss scene is sweet! I like the story and I look forward to more chapters!

Great chapter, your story is progressing nicely so far!

AW, I loved the scene where she tells him she's Dragonborn! Wonderfull done!

I like the slow build of sexual tension, very nicely done!

I like this Lydia character, very interesting! Good story, all around.

"Well I can't go walking around naked, Bryn" Loved that line! It made me giggle.

Another good chapter! Your story is making me much interested in the Elder Scrolls 'verse!

I never made it very far in Skyrim because it became a little dull for me but your story makes me want to give it another try! I like the character of Rynn and I really like her name (it reminds me of Rin Sohma from my favorite manga!) Great opening thus far!

I hope you update again and soon, very good so far and I can not wait that the two have their moment!

Beautiful! each chapter has been read several times! I appreciate your work! There are some inaccuracies but it is very good! well you built the characters'! involved me and now expect the next move!