you put "Ah! Mycroft !" Instead of moriarty.

Wow, I love, love this story so far:)

Not much for the gay scenes, so I'm glad you didn't focus on them to long.

Moriarty texts a lot like Sherlock, they have the same style. Nice touch!

OH MY GOD

ERMYGAWD THIS IS MY FAV SHIP FOR THIS SERIES I LOVE THIS SO FAR THANKYOU YOU DONT KNOW HOW MUCH A GOOD STORY MEANS TO ME,, AND JIMMY SO CHEEKY DARLING,,

Moriarty actually seems to care about Sherlock a little bit. Yet he is scaring him and threatening to kill his friends and family. I love it.

Pretty good.

Poison ? God, it is genius...

""Ah! Mycroft!" he gasped sharply. Again Jim's eyebrows shot up. For some odd reason, he was filled with a desire to utterly annihilate the elder Holmes, or at the very least, fill him with absolute guilt for his actions."" What did he do there ? Mycroft ? I don't understand...sorry I am french. I add that I like your story.

I'm longing for the sequel ! Cause I loved this story

Hope to read you soon

Holy meatballs!

Stockholm Syndrome romance! :O

I love this! Great job :)

i can't wait for the sequel
i loved it
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so Jim did love Sherlock or is it fake

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still loving this fic
just don't quite know what to say
it was all good
jim's being bipolar :P
poor john and sherlock
sherlock's going to get bored and be an abandoned puppy again
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so Jim knew about Sherlocks plan to poison
him

I really hate it when Sherlock gets bored.
I hope... I don't know what I'm hoping for anymore.
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