Ah, yes. I read the first chapter when you first posted it, and Sassy (down there) and I were talking about Debra whilst I was listening about Tori Amos' "Only Women Bleed", and I mentioned a wonderful fic I had began reading a few days ago. Anyhow, I enjoyed it, and I know you're taking some heat for writing them OOC, but I think it makes it more real, and it makes you think about the seriousness of the situation because it's much more of a reality when you use the OOC. We don't know what happened between them true enough, but we as fans speculate, and as long as they are in the limelight we always will. And the harsh reality of it all really makes one think about these things. You did a hell of a job with this story. It will definitely go on my favorites. -t

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Hello, my friend Digital Tempest told me about this fic. I'll be honest...at first, I was hesitant and not completely keen on reading a story about the the domestic violence incident that happened between Steve and Debra Williams. However, I am glad I gave this fic a chance. It was very well written. Your writing was heartfelt, you gave more character and substance than the WWF ever did. I liked how you went into her past and into the present. This was beautiful writing. I, like you, hope and wish for the best for the Williams. Thank you for writing this and for sharing this.

Its not fair to say that you shouldn't write about the couple's personal life, when other fanfics are written about couple's personal lives. However, being as this might have been a real event, I don't think you should write the story since no one knows what really happened. But you are a talented writer and I hope to see more from you.

I'm not saying that you shouldn't write this story, I just believe that you should wait until ALL the facts come out first. Since all the details are kind of blurry, its hard to write such a serious and realistic story

good story...keep it going :)

You gotta keep this story goin Em, it's soo good. You're such a talented writer and *squeals* I can't wait for our story to be posted! You rule girl!

I like this story. Please continue it. It is one of the better stories on the net. I like it 'cause

I rarely see fic about Debra herself from her point of view. We normally see her as a face in the crowd. I actually like Debra. I hope the WWE can find a place for her on the roster. Hook her up with Bischoff or something. Anyhow good work. Keep it up!

I see and respect your point of view, however the fanfictions about Stephanie and Triple H are based on a storyline not real life. We have no idea what exactly went down on the imfamous night, I have heard that his daughter was recently put into rehab and he was edgey. Not that anything excuses dosmetic violence. It seems that every last friend that Austin ever have has turned on him, including his job. The entire next WWE magazine will be on him entitled "Why?", with exclusive interviews from the police that are working the case. There are nothing but rumors going on about this, and the last thing we need our more false assumptions and exaggerations. Please do not take this as an Austin fan just doing whatever it takes to cover up for her idol. That is honestly not the case, I am not even that big of a wwe fan anymore, more XPW than anything. This also like my other review was not written to insult your writing in anyway. You are a very talented writer. This is simply my opinion as the story is yours. With the current events on hand including war, teenage suicide, and children being locked in cars until there death, this story simply rubbed me the wrong way. Don't get my wrong I love poetry, emo music and angst stories, stories that are ficitonal. What has happened between Steve and his wife is his business and hers, not ours. As fans we are to enjoy their in ring, televised show. When in character. Anything out of the ring, is none of our business. If something similar happened to you would want everyone to be questioning it every half second? If everyone continues to judge before either Debra or Steve gets a chance to tell their side of the story will anyone be able to enjoy their performance again? Will they even be up to it? Doubtful. As said before this is just a matter of opinion it is not directed at the author personally in anyway.

-Melissa

I believe you should continue because you do not know the extent into which he hit her or if he has even done it more than once. It is just fanfiction and it isn't like you are telling exactly what happened to her. I think it is a great story and I would like you to continue.

I luved this story girl! Don't listen to what that girl below me said. I think it was well written and the concept was good, plus it was original. Like I expected anything less from my pal! Keep it up!

It was well written, however I think it is too soon to be writing about this when we still know little about it and it is not wrestling television it is their personal lives which they are entitled to have.

wow awesome stuff