I loved it but the ending made me saf

Whaaattt... that's how it ended? I'm so stunned. I mean, I know you hinted at it, but it seems so sudden. Well other than the ending (:P), this was very well written. I really enjoyed it, interesting story line.

Brilliant! Excellent writing and a great story. I liked that you had the guts to end it on such a sad note. Happy endings get a bit old after awhile and life isn't always happy. Very well done!

Aww.. Loved the story!

So I just discovered this story today and I am in love! I know someone probably already pointed this out to you, but the boys were using 9mm twin barrettas in the first movie. They didn't start using desert eagles until the second one, which btw is a HUGE down grade. But I suspect desert eagle paid handsomely for the contract. Other than that, I'm loving the whole story! And also, I have to say your smut scenes are the best I have ever read. Hands down. And I have read a LOT. So yea, thank you for that. ;)

That's a terrible ending. I'm so sad now. :'(

The bullet thing happens in Two Mules for Sister Sarah too (western...she really isn't a nun though). Only, it was an arrow removal type deal.

I loved this story even though i hated that she died. I'm a sucker for a happy ending I'm just lame like that. But still an amazing story I loved Wren and Murph together and i also loved her relationship with Ryan wish I could have seen what he said to her in the hospital room before Murphy showed up. Keep up the good work!

I died.
I freaking died.
Thank you for writing this, it was fantastic.
But seriously.
R.I.P. Wren.

So I legit just read this whole story in like 24 hours! One of the best stories I have ever read on this site, total shocker at the end though. I had to reread the last part of it just to make sure I had read it right! Seriously great job on this! I loved the character of Ryan, makes me wish I could read a story just about Wren and him. While Murph is perfect for her, to explore a relationship with Wren and Ryan would be super interesting to read!

My heart stopped. My heart and breathing actually stopped. For a second there I was dead. I mean..how..why...NRGH?! *sigh*

Oh well... An exceptional ending for an exceptional story. From start to finish, reading this fic was a wonderful experience, just thought you wanted to know that. I just can't seem to get over the finale. Anyway, over all you did a great job :) cheers

I can dig it :)

Holy freaking crap. That was amazing! I loved it so much! This story was truly one of the best that I've ever read. I've spent the last three days reading it because I got so addicted.
I love that it's so original. It's hard to find something that's this truly original...idea wise at least.
I loved Wren! She is just so badass! I loved all of the history behind her and the fact that she could hold her own in a fight and hers and Murphy's relationship is played out perfectly!
But I hate you so much for killing her! Why?
You, my friend are a freaking amazing writer and I can't wait to read more of your work!

WHAT? SHE DIED? HOLY FUCK! Okay, still a good story, had me in tears in a lot of places...

I just read your author's note and I have to agree! I won't lower myself to read 50 Shades of grey, because I think its just a cheap, raunchy knock off of Twilight, which I can't stand anyway! How in the FUCK did this woman get her book published when they are thousands of amazing writers out there (such as yourself)? The whole thing just makes me sick! This story is beyond amazing! It blows that other crap right out of the water!