Hi! I really love this fanfiction! I hope you update it really soon! I would LOVE to see what happens next! See ya!-

omg so epic!

UPDATES AND FUN YAY!
Also, WHAT.

omg this is awesome! MAGGIES SU ADORABLLLLLEEEEEE! -lesquee!-

Well, well, well, is that a TF2 reference I see? :D

I'm loving this story so far! Keep up the great work!

:D
UPDATE YAY!
MEEP!
Sirica: Call down!
Me: No!
Blitz(a Wolfwrath OC): *pounces on me and starts eating my shirt*
Me: Blitz! *tries to run but fails*

Please do more!

Happy Birthday or something! Can you also have Meta Knight, Kirby, or Dedede show up?

I like how Maggie's petting the dragon.

Haha niiiiice. Your doing well with the story. Keep updating!

In conclusion, it's cute and it's funny but it's not as good as it can be. This reminds me of something I would think of though, good job. You should make this whole story humorous and non-serious in my opinion. My favorite part was when Ribbon and Gooey came in and they didn't have time to buy anything. It was like "But we didn't buy anything..." "Too bad!" Haha :D
Please please please pleeeeease add the Squeak Squad soon! They're my favorites, especially Daroach! How about they argue for discounts and everyone gets in a big fight about coupons and stuff. That would make my day. When the Squeak Squad debut, Spinni, Doc, Storo, the Squeakers and Daroach must all be there. It makes me mad when people only mention Daroach and Spinni and say they're done! :( Yeah, so that's my idea thanks for reading my review!

You got hit by Hurricane Sandy too? Gee. My area was affected by it too, but I didn't suffer any power outages. I give you my greatest sympathies.

I love the story. :3. I especially like wittle Maggie-boo

As an idea, perhaps Drawcia could end up drawing the characters (Magolor, Marx, etc.) in an anime style out of boredom, but then she forgets that whatever she draws comes to life, but somehow the characters are changed to an anime style and they have to deal with the hardships of being an anime character while running the store? :3.

I like Maggie already. :3.

these chappies are great! Maggies so funny. and i feel very sorry for you and anyone else who got hammered by Sandy. good luck, with recovering, and the story!

Not bad! Kirby should come and eat all the food and Magolor should give him an endless debt.