| Reviews for Be carefull what you wish for |
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KiraFoxHime09 chapter 1 . 10/4/2017 Wow...I’m crying right now...just...wow...THE FEELSSSSSSSS!,!,! !, |
teabrows chapter 1 . 6/5/2016 I don't care about the grammatical errors. This story is simply brilliant. It is very emotional, and even with all the mistakes, you portrayed it nicely. I think my brain just made a filter for the...you know, and it is worth it. Like my other review for your latest collection of one-shots, I cried like a wee babe. You certainly have the potential. Want to edit it? I read your latest story, and it is a great improvement. |
Dakota May chapter 1 . 2/11/2014 I swear...this story...a mix of emotions. It goes from happy to sad, and then the ending is just...wonderful. The way you put in the flashbacks was incredible. I was so sad to know that the world had gone under, and yet, so happy that Sealand was able to survive. I feel that if this actually ever happened, sending Sealand under water would be a tough decision. You are a great author! Keep writing! |
The secret trio chapter 1 . 7/23/2013 that is so sad. I really feel sad for Sealand |
CaffeinatedKitty chapter 1 . 3/31/2013 This is the saddest little story including Sealand that I've ever read. ;n; It makes a very good point too. It's a good story and your English is really good! ((Warning. Overuse of the word 'good' in this review XD)) |
lexipanda13 chapter 1 . 3/30/2013 This is amazingly well written, by the end I was a mess of tears! Would you consider continuing it? |
paninya chapter 1 . 11/2/2012 OMFG IM CRYING!*SOB* JUST...SEALAND! YOU POOOOOOOR BAAABY! |
kayra isis chapter 1 . 9/22/2012 oh my god this is so sad, so heartbreaking! you made me cry really... my god what an excelent job you did here! you really manage to put your feelings here... keep writing like this ) |
ignacia437 chapter 1 . 9/2/2012 Beautifully written! I love the irony, how Sealand finally became a nation greater than England…but because England's gone. I almost cried reading this. |