I really enjoy this overall and I think its a really good spin for transformers honestly from this fic!

Nice job with the story so far

please update

Please come back to this it’s so good

This is why you do not piss off the husband of Arachnia he would tear off your damn arm and beat you with it

I almost forgot

All hail the Predacon empire!

Well this is now one of my favorite stories hope to see it finished someday, and if it is there are two things I’d like to see.

1) I feel like Jack should change his name I was thinking Onyx after Onyx prime

2) Down the road I want to see the teams reaction to Jack and Arachnid having kids.

That's the good shit right here laddie.

Please finish this story I want to know how it ends!

I know that 4 years have passed since the last update and I hope that you will update some day.
Have you thought about future chapters to put elements of the movie Predacon rising as Predaking?
Because I have the sense that later in the story Arcee is going to turn its back on the Autobots and will join Jack and in the process become a Predacon with the virus, although I doubt it because Arcee feels a hatred towards Airachnid.
Since Jack and Airachnid are going to create predacons with humans and create an army for war, the idea sounds interesting.

Please write more chapters I want to find out how it will end!

I honestly expected most of the story to be smut, but you've made a wonderful mixture of steamy action and engaging plot. A good artist keeps the audience wanting more, and you have done so brilliantly. I especially enjoyed using parts of canon to explain and steer away from the established plot like Arachnid being originally known as Elita-1 and using her concocted serum to turn Jack into a Transformer himself. I know it has been four years since you have last updated, but I will favorite this in hopes of the next chapter.

Best wishes!
-TastyChicken

Plz update it's amazing

Wow, that has been a ride of a lifetime! I am loving this story! Thank you!

Please update your story soon!