Reviews for Petals of Time |
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![]() ![]() ![]() First time I've read with Ib's dad as the story teller. It's really nice how protective he is. Considering that in the game he... didn't do anything much. Even Ib somehow showed she preferred her mom (shes's the one who'd try to lure her into staying in the painting) lol. Anyway, it's interesting and would be more great if it's continued. Thanks for writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This sounds pretty good so far, i can't wait to see any future chapters, I'm sure they'll be just as good :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw that was both really sweet and pretty funny. XD I hope that you'll eventually add more. Keep up the good work! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Next chapter, ASAP! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awww write more pleaaaaaase! D: |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great one shot! I love how protective Ib's father is, and how Garry is portrayed! "... ready to catapult myself through this very window if that filthy man dares to lay a hand on my daughter!" and "I glare at his face, trying to memorize it for when I do a pedophile search later on my PC." were hilarious! |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I liked it very cute. Ib's dad is hilarious here XD |
![]() ![]() love it! please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please write more this is great! |
![]() ![]() Q.Q awww His father was funny I want more of thisTT |
![]() ![]() one-shot!? NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO update *A* |
![]() ![]() ![]() AHHH! I WANT MOOOOORRRRRREEEEEEE! Nice job by the way 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoyed this first chapter :) please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it! It's really good :3 I hope you update it soon. Expecting to see more Ib stories from you! OuO |