Poor Mugen. : ( Well done story!

Ah. This was wonderful. It would be nice to read another story like this one. Perhaps a story in which Mugen was the one to turn around first. Now that would be something. :)

Thanks for the wonderful one-shot! I love the dynamic between Mugen and Jin here. (Really, who could possibly choose between these two men?) Jin has such a gentle demeanor, he seems like the perfect choice for a first lover. The only gripe I have is that Jin reveals to Mugen that Fuu still has feelings for him and Mugen moves to leave. Argh. (I want him to stay and try to win her ;)

Noooooooo, poor Mugen, WHY?