I’m actually mad. Can you please update the bio saying this. I spent 2hrs reading this one to have wasted my time. Thank you.

I do not like stories where the so called Council has so much power while the Hokage should have been in charge. The way how writers portray the whole scene is always a downslide for any stories who start with this. I mean, what can the Council do? All they can bitch! Yet, never in my adventure on Fanfiction see I them being punished.

She would have sent The Council of 3 and the Civilian Council to Ibiki. They did go behind her back and that is already treason. They can say, we have this or that... but that doesn't change anything. They should have been stripped and tortured.

Sorry... but I don't like your start of the story. Its garbage.

I am looking foward to Chapter 21 and Naruto should discover he is part Saiyan.

So naruto acting like nothing happened. What is he a retard

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Looking forward to when you update this fan fiction. And a Naruto/Arrow crossover sounds interesting. Will Naruto have chakra or not in the Arrow crossover?

Kinda disappointed this isn't a new chapter but I do it nderstand some of what you are going through and am looking forward for the new stories the sound interesting and if you're serious about Ichigo facing Thanos then why stop there, why not go the distance and and both Naruto and Gohan into the fight I think that would be more interesting then just Ichigo don't you?

I am looking forward to chapter 22 and I hope Naruto train to fight Beerus the destroyer.

Ooh, depression. Been there. I wish you all the best in your recovery. Having lost a friend from it in the past, I do hope you reach out to a therapist soon.

And as far as your stories go, you already know I'll be there for whatever project you put out. A Mirai Gohan fic would DEFINITELY be a new addition. The Future Timeline is one of the bleakest timeline's in DBZ, and makes for good storytelling.

If you need some help, I'd suggest taking a look at "This War of Mine" by Sivam. I'm also one to reach out to for an opinion, I'm good for it! X)

P.S: Thanks for the shoutout! :D

I am looking forward to chapter 22 and I hope Naruto have a relationship with Hinata.

Gotenks is not one of my favorite characters, he's got Trunks' arrogance, and his attack names are rather weird. Super Ghost Kamikaze Attack, Galactic Donuts, Super Volleyball Beam. Gogeta's are rather cool Bigbang Kamehameha, his little five finger beam, and of course there's Vegito's attacks like Spirit Sword and an attack created in DBX 2 Final Kamehameha.

Okay first of all, Tsunade is the fucking hokage...there is nobody in the village with a higher authority than her. If she really wanted to, she could have the elders publicly executed for a minor offense. There is no reason for her to be unable to bring Naruto back. One of the reason Naruto was never actually banished in the anime or manga is because the council doesn’t get to decide what happens to a ninja under the employment of the hokage. It’s like the senators taking command of the military...it doesn’t work like that.

Second of all...no, that’s all I got for now since I only read up to chapter 1.

Read this fanfic, and honestly, your idea of power levels is plain bullshit. If you had made naruto as strong as SSJ2 full power in his rikudou mode, then I could have seen the meaning. But you just wrote and wrote and made it boring. 6/10

Please update it soon

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