What kind of backwoods shit is this? "He's your brother now, but he'll be your husband later." Lol!

What happened to Rosalie was so much worse. I think you overdid the don't trust men part, especially when she openly admits that she met other friendly men. I can see why you used it as something to overcome, but a more abusive or tormented background would have better justified her caution. What happened to her wasn't enough to lead to distaste for all men.

Okay I've read the header of the next chapter and I saw that you hated hurtful comments, so I'm not going to swear much. But this is getting pretty stupid. How did you even consider this line, let alone deciding this is the best direction for this story?! I know I haven't finished it yet, and it might very well be the best direction ( somehow) but it doesn't make any sense. Bella was complacent for 50 years, and you call her a heroine with a backbone?! Why the hell did she wait for so long?! How the hell could she, after finding her mate? How did Edward even endure it?! And for what reason?! She could destroy Volturi by her self. She just had to shield Chelsea, and bam, no more united Volturi. She could even tell Marcus what happened to his mate. And this is just the most pacifistic way of dealing with Volturi. She could also kill Aro, Caius, Alec, Jane, and Demitri, making Volturi useless. She said to Edward that she was dark, and she tortured people before, why not the Volturi?
This arc of the story was so idiotic that I'm not sure if I could continue reading this. But I probably will and get angry along the way, I'm just this masochistic and stupid.

Another thing, in previous chapters, you stated that Bella has lost her English accent and speaks without an accent which is wrong. Bella was probably speaking with an American accent.

I know this story is more than 5 years old and you might not see this, but I couldn't continue reading without nagging about how terrible it has become. Don't mind me if you see this though, I'm just rambling and nagging because I think this is stupid.

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Amazing Story

I love the story

This is amazing I read it all in one go and stayed up till 3am so good Xxx

Thanks for writing this amazing story I really enjoyed it.

Beautiful story, as always, I love your every charaters in this story.

AWESOME! I absolutely loved it! Defininetly going to reread! Many times over!

Loved it! thanks for sharing.

Gawwwd they're so cute together. Great story!

Wait. Ninety one? Do human years not count? She is 121 years old, right?

Fantasy was not that popular until around the 1960s, or am I wrong in assuming that? In any case, this is looking to be a great story, good work!

I love this story so much! bella is so cool!