| Reviews for It's Burning Through the Bloodline |
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derekctomlinson chapter 1 . 5/26 lol naked jill smirking at her husband chris redfield just drain your seed with your penis into my pussy already |
TinaVonRotter chapter 1 . 5/4/2013 Wow! Well described, sexy and yet with the right hint of decency. By the way, is it possible that you got the title from the Florence and the Machine song "Landscapes"? :) |
KristalFlare chapter 1 . 10/12/2012 Intense scene. Great details |
deanandjo4ever1 chapter 1 . 10/8/2012 I'm not always a fan of smutt but that was amazing. I think you captured the characters perfectly. It was really well written I loved it. |
cybercorpsesnake chapter 1 . 10/7/2012 That was really short but you managed to convey a lot. |
Little Gem Magnolia chapter 1 . 9/22/2012 Very nice. :D |
meatballs in the impala chapter 1 . 9/4/2012 It's tremendously amazing how many emotions can be contained in a mere handful of words. In just under 600 words, you managed to coney the raw passion that Chris and Jill feel for each other, although this fic is mainly in Chris's point of view. While you went on describing sex, you managed to do so without being graphic or offending, and I'm glad for that. I think the present-tense you used was a way to show that things were happening between the two real fast, and how eager both of them were to submit to their feelings for each other. It was a lovely fic, and I'm happy I had the opportunity to read it. Good work. :) |
tek chapter 1 . 9/2/2012 I don't even know what to offer here, other than this is wonderful just as it is. You have an incredible way of describing moments for what they are, and I hope you continue writing. This is what the RE section needs. |
sophie623 chapter 1 . 9/1/2012 This is awesome. So hot, sexy and full of love :) perfect. |