Súper hot! Estaría buenísimo si continúas con la historia.
Quiero saber que va a pasar con edward y bella.

AWESOME & I loved it soooo much!

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That was freaking HOT!

They didn't use a condom nor did they establish any sort of birth control! Where do they move from here? Bella is likely to go to college... It was a good; satisfying one-shot though.

I loved this. Wish it would turn into a story, like a remake.

very hot

Jayyyyyyyyyysusssssssss fucking hot!

Wow! That was very good.

I liked the story very much. It was really... Unnerving. Wow! It's getting me all hot and bothered. But the ending was slightly sinister? It's not like Edward was devilishly evil or anything, it's just that when he said: "I finally got a taste of what I had been yearning for... But I knew... This was merely a sample..." It's like he almost didn't love Bella and only wanted her for her body. Maybe that's the reason why he called a divorce on Tanya and ended their marriage? Because of his lust for Bella? Who knows. I think this story has great potential and you should continue writing it. And if you really don't want to keep writing for it... I'll maybe adopt it, if you'd like.

I love this story. I wonder if there is a sequel.

fucking amazing! I didnt quite like the end, thou. It feels kind of incomplete. Like it must continue. I want an EPV !

I really love this story and would have like to read the rest if it did exist. Too bad there is no more story on the author's profile

That was totally hot! Would love for it to continue!

Omg I want more this was intense and freaking sexy as hell!