love your writing please write more

This is so good, I. Hope Ida gets what she deserves and Ed And Donna are happy, now more reading..hehe happy:-)

Looking good so far, I hope donna doesn't lose the second baby, and she behaves herself, Ida needs a good long stay where she is now!.hehe

Awesome, starting to love this story, I was teary eyed, now I want more, good job:-)

Nice ending!

It must have been tough for Donna to choose to leave the team but it 's the right one. Her job is dangerous with long hours. Not good for a couple with a small child. Plus with Ed in the field too they need to have one parent with more regular hours. She can still be with the rams - so it's the best of both worlds.

Love the milestones & buying a house plus maybe baby 2?
Great story! Enjoyed it a lot!

loved it...fantastic ending to this series... ;D

What a a great ending! Love how all of them are trying to figure out where Spike gets the bear...:) I'm glad Eddie was heard his daughter say dada and see her take the first steps.

I know making the decision to leaving her position was tough but one of them needs to be around for their daughter. And she gets to train officers and still be in the field.

This was a great way to end the final chapter... Started with Ida but ended on a happy family with a bubbly happy little girl! Thank you and Alice for a very happy ending and wonderful stories..:-)

Very cute ending! Lots of milestones hit in this one! So first word Mamma then second Dadda that was cute! And at the end with the new house then the wedding vows cute ending! Little Cassandra was trying Sooo hard to walk! Glad Eddie didn't miss any big milestones:) soo Donna took the other new job... Interesting! Get it for the family and all but Donna isn't normally one to back down! Kinda sad that the story is done and finished for good!:( but by any chance will there be any new Flashpoint stories at all? Ha there u go u have ur review! Going to miss this! One final time I LOVED LOVED LOVED IT!:) hope there is more stories to come! Aha well quess I should go and do some researching for my chemistry project! Thank YOU once again for writing for everyone I love reading the updates and always get excited when there is a new flashpoint story! Thanks again!:)

Great chapter. I loved the family interaction. I loved your AU stories. Please write more.

Duh, of course I want more AU stories! Well done, no flames here...I love a happy ending!

what a lovely ending. so happy for ed and donna. would love some more stories.

"Final review" has a bittersweet ring to it. Sorry to see this series come to a conclusion, but so happy that it exists.

Heart-warming is the best way to put this one. After all the trials they've been through, it's so *good* to have a happy finish to the trilogy. Even with the few little tense moments you slipped in there for this chapter, it's all really good stuff.

Loved the running gag about Spike and the yellow bears, and again, how supportive their friends are.
Cassie's milestones were precious moments I'm glad we got to see, as well as how Ed and Donna were picking up on inherited traits and tendencies (she has your determination, etc.).

They won the war together, and get to celebrate life as they settle into a new place.

Thanks for this. I enjoyed it all. :-)

Absolutely loved the ending to this story and so glad you paired them together and can't wait to read the next story you write im sure it will be a good one :)

Love this chapter a fitting end for this story...really enjoyed all the peril, hurt, tears and tension, glad it ended on a happy note and that there were still feelings of being unsure about Donna going back to work and missing your baby's first words and steps...and that Ed knows what he wanted Donna to do but wouldn't really say anything until really pushed, really liked that Donna still worried more about Ed doing his job even more now they have a daughter, and really awesome story with everything you could want in it...loved it. Well done Alice

What are you and Alice trying to do to me...Yeah I've turned in to a gooey mess lol.
I really loved it, really reminded me of a couple I know. They are both in active service and sometimes they have to make some hard choices, especially where the kids are concerned but they get by :)
Well I'm sad it ended but it was a natural progression, and I loved reading every part ...gleaming... Thanks for writing.