THIS STORY IS SO AWESOME. I LOVED IT . I thought you said you published this. if you did can you tell me where to get it?

Whoa! Your first story ever?! Hot damn, you got talent! And we have you on the S.S Valduggery! Yay!
Ok, review time.
I loved this story. It's very well written and the characters are so very much in character. I can just picture some of their interactions happening in the Skulduggery Pleasant series! That's how well you've written them. And I'm very impressed with your creativity! I loved that this had a plot and a climax and a happy ending and everything.
Thank you for sharing this with us.
Happy writing!

Awesome story!

This is your first story? It's just like the real book! You're an amazing writer! :)

You had absolutely nothing to worry about! This story is perfect! Your grammar is great, too!

I love this story...

NOOOOOOO! IT'S OVER! *cries dramatically* But it was really good, loved the ending :)

I like the use of the term 'always'. Its very Richard Castle, and Kate Beckett. I love that show...YAY CASTLE! Anyway, back on point, great story!

That was really good! It's so sweet :) And I love how SKulduggery's body comes back. That's one thing I couldn't of guessed :)

Saph

AWWWWWWWWW!

Good chapter and I have the same birthday as you :)

Also, get better soon! :)

Saph

That was awesome! I can't wait for the next chapter, PLEASE update soon! Will Skulduggery get the locket off by kissing her? Maybe?

Saph

SECOND LAST CHAPTER?! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO O! It is going to be one AWKWARD meeting between Skullduggery and Valkyrie...

Oh my god, this is literally one of the best, most well written fan fictions I've read. Keep up the good work I'd love to continue reading.

I almost feel sorry for Darquesse...almost!