why did u stop?

Ok. Who is Yori's father? I honestly don't care about that. I really hope both Ichigo and Orihime can love Yori like he was their dream baby. No matter who Yori's father is, it wasn't his fault that was born. Please update soon.

who's getting brought back? yori or aizen? is yori's perception of ichi's occasional coldness real or just due to teen angst? is this a version of ichi not being able to fully embrace yori b/c of who the biological daddy is or b/c he's the product of a rape? just not being biologically related shouldn't be it since adopted kids are typically loved equally (if parents are good & not neglectful/abusive), so if its a real difference in treatment, i'd assume its due to rape origin & fact that he's a constant reminder of ichi's own perceived failure to protect ori... guess we'll see. but do hope yori is loved by both parents & not just his sister (& i get its not an incestuous love, lots of sibs are very close & best friends as well as sibs). did the other nakama not have kids yet, b/c i figured the 2nd generation of original nakama group would be close to each other.

I love your idea for this story! Can't wait to see how this story progress.
Is aizen the father? Please be. Aihime is another pairing that i love

Oh I am liking this. Please go on. :)

not logged in. please continue. aizen was daddy? no hollow hole, so am guessing had to be shinigami, & only one i imagine would care to rape her is aizen. am guessing SS will want baby when they find out, out of fear or desire for study at 12th squad...

Since he had dark hair, the only one I can think of is Ulquiorra. I was hope it was Aizen *hic*
This writing style is nice, the good thing is you don't make it too fluffy.

Still you know, they're only fifteen! They need to go to school and study. Did hime give up school? How can they be parents at such a young age. Just thinking about such young people having sex turn me off, not to mention they get married!

It could be nicer if you make it an AU and raise the age up a little bit. And since this is a cannon, how's about Ichi's powers his shinigami's duty. With this setting, I think it's best that you make it an Au with similar setting to the cannon.