| Reviews for Picture Perfect |
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kyuki619 chapter 17 . 7/29/2014 YYEASSSSS FINALLY THEY ARE TOGETHER! |
kyuki619 chapter 15 . 7/29/2014 really? ruin the moment... |
kyuki619 chapter 13 . 7/29/2014 WOW i cant believe eriol did that |
kyuki619 chapter 12 . 7/28/2014 lol he says "it's a guy thing"! LMAO! LOL! |
kyuki619 chapter 11 . 7/28/2014 so that was also eriol's first kiss as well? |
kyuki619 chapter 10 . 7/28/2014 wow i knew he was going to do that... |
kyuki619 chapter 8 . 7/28/2014 sigh and here we go... eriol u better saver her... |
kyuki619 chapter 6 . 7/28/2014 tomoyo is denying that she is in love with him all these years... |
kyuki619 chapter 4 . 7/28/2014 ohhhhhhhh i think she is going to regret it... |
kyuki619 chapter 2 . 7/28/2014 wow...different personality of tomoyo in here... i can never imagine tomoyo get frustrated... |
guest-who chapter 17 . 6/23/2014 Totally love this.. thanks I really enjoyed reading this |
Yesterday's Secrets chapter 17 . 6/14/2013 Honestly this is the first time that I've read a fanfic that centers around the relationship between Tomoyo and Eriol so it's quite a nice change for me not to mention a nice break from the thousands of SyaoSaku fanfics out there. Anyway, overall I'd give this story a 8/10 because while it is an entertaining read, it's so fast-paced that I couldn't feel the in-depth emotions of the main characters. Especially at the last chapter. Judging from the numerous stories of yours that I had read before this, you are definitely capable of humor but I didn't quite catch that sense of yours in PP. Nonetheless, the plot really is quite great and your writing skills are okay. I never would've guessed the twists and turns that you manipulated here lol. This story has so much potential if it wasn't for the quick pace on which I obviously don't particularly like. Also, you can do much better than carelessly drop bombs (that didn't quite explode the way that you must've wanted it to) on the last chapter. That's all. Keep on writing! Cheers, Yesterday's Secrets |
watermelon17 chapter 17 . 8/7/2012 "God thank the miracle of love." I like that line! Tomoyo and Eriol are so meant for each other! I love this fic! |
Tommy-yomz chapter 17 . 4/12/2011 Aww, what a great story. |
Amytis-Chan chapter 17 . 12/23/2007 so sweet! I luv miracles! |