Hehe cute

I love the story! Great writing here. I hope that maybe you will add to either this story or one of your other ones:) I'll be watching.

Great chap and ending here...he does have her attention:) I like what you do with these wonderful characters.

Awesome loved it

Beautiful. Short and sweet, something that can get those with writers block back into the writing mindset. You're a good author, format wise and in dialogue.

I'm still enjoying this, and I think I may have found another story to follow. I don't tend to follow any random story due to people changing their opinions and taking the story in a complete different direction half way through, but so far this has caught my interest.

I'm glad you had Naruto and Hinata come to terms with their relationship, I just wish you would have had Hinata explain to Naruto why she was avoiding him. Just to give a bit more fluff lol.

Ending scene was fun and actually a creative way to end the chapter. Keep it up, can't wait to see where this tale is headed.

jajajaja! i loved rock lee and guy-sensey!

jajajajaja... well.. now hinata cant avoid him.. XD

awww!

Lol, loved the comical ending! Good stuff, m'friend! However, I recommend that you make a summary that actually tells a little bit of what the story's about, both for this fic an any other fics you post. It helps, trust me.

Either way, can't wait to see more!

LOL, nice! Good stuff, m'friend!

Continue please.

lol I finished it like WHAT THE HECK? WHERE'S THE REST! But then I remembered I searched for stories that were just posted today. _; My bad. I'm enjoying it so far, though I would think Sakura would have just a little tiny bit of jealously towards Naruto focusing on Hinata more than her now. Still a great beginning, can't wait for the next chapter.

its a good beginning.

That's a nice story you got there and i really like it...hope you update soon...:)