| Reviews for A New Mission |
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Guest chapter 2 . 4/11/2018 Love it |
Hikari Nova chapter 2 . 2/28/2018 revive and update please as you've left this with a cliff hanger |
WhiteElfElder chapter 2 . 1/15/2014 I have seen this beginning several times under a similarly titled, however, I look forward to how you may take it in a different direction. |
chris678 chapter 2 . 5/9/2013 i like the premise and your writing style is good but i would like to know if this has been abandoned? |
jeffery.gerbermartin chapter 2 . 12/10/2012 please keep going with this story :) |
Wulffe chapter 2 . 11/21/2012 Very interesting story so far .. :-} |
Phoenix-Tears-101 chapter 2 . 11/11/2012 I think its great :) hope you update soon |
Zyanadryn chapter 2 . 11/1/2012 please continue! |
Guest chapter 2 . 10/30/2012 Horrible, horrible fanon. Have you even read Harry Potter? I haven't, and even I know better than this dreck. |
loubega chapter 2 . 10/31/2012 Great start. Can't wait for more. |
Philip chapter 2 . 10/28/2012 good so far. keep it up. |
pax-draconix chapter 2 . 10/28/2012 I like the concept, and can see it developing into a great story. Looking forward to seeing your evolution as a writer. |
RoughIslandSunrise chapter 2 . 10/27/2012 Intresting. Please update. |
Guest chapter 2 . 10/23/2012 Besides some punctuation errors, it is a good start! |
roberthal1 chapter 2 . 10/23/2012 amazing story can not wait to see what happens |