Reviews for A New Mission
Guest chapter 2 . 4/11/2018
Love it
Hikari Nova chapter 2 . 2/28/2018
revive and update please as you've left this with a cliff hanger
WhiteElfElder chapter 2 . 1/15/2014
I have seen this beginning several times under a similarly titled, however, I look forward to how you may take it in a different direction.
chris678 chapter 2 . 5/9/2013
i like the premise and your writing style is good but i would like to know if this has been abandoned?
jeffery.gerbermartin chapter 2 . 12/10/2012
please keep going with this story :)
Wulffe chapter 2 . 11/21/2012
Very interesting story so far ..

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Phoenix-Tears-101 chapter 2 . 11/11/2012
I think its great :) hope you update soon
Zyanadryn chapter 2 . 11/1/2012
please continue!
Guest chapter 2 . 10/30/2012
Horrible, horrible fanon. Have you even read Harry Potter? I haven't, and even I know better than this dreck.
loubega chapter 2 . 10/31/2012
Great start. Can't wait for more.
Philip chapter 2 . 10/28/2012
good so far. keep it up.
pax-draconix chapter 2 . 10/28/2012
I like the concept, and can see it developing into a great story. Looking forward to seeing your evolution as a writer.
RoughIslandSunrise chapter 2 . 10/27/2012
Intresting. Please update.
Guest chapter 2 . 10/23/2012
Besides some punctuation errors, it is a good start!
roberthal1 chapter 2 . 10/23/2012
amazing story can not wait to see what happens
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