Please please please finish this story I’ve been following it since you started it and I’ve been coming back to re-read it, hoping to find a new chapter

Another day , another moment I think about this fantastic story I read years ago. And yes I still come back to check for updates monthly. I hope if you are still on here that you are doing well .

Wow! I didn't think I would be able to get into this story because I'm not at all interested in sports, but I enjoyed it so much! Loved Bella fucking with Mike and her friendships with Emmett, Riley and Jasper. I liked Edward being the more emotionally available one, that was really interesting. I thought how you wrote Bella's need to bolt was very accurate and then her still having that immediate fight or flight reaction, but not acting on it was very well written and evocative. Edward's scenes where he was upset by his parents or losing a game were really good too, I liked how you showed their different reactions, to shut down or run. Overall loved this story a lot!
I'm sad this is likely the last chapter for this story, but glad it's not a cliffhanger! I feel pretty satisfied that they're happy and nothing's going to come between them.

Found myself back here during quarantine. Still just as good as the first time i read it. Any chance it might be continued?

NOW would be a GREAT time for you to stop betaing and start posting and writing

Hi there! I’m sure I’ve left many reviews in the same vein but I absolutely love this story and during this time I’ve re-read it for the 100th time. I hope it’s not forgotten forever and that it could be picked up again!

You probably aren't reading the reviews much anymore but I wanted to tell you I just read your story again for the 4th time and I wish there had been a real ending. These characters were so enjoyable and I feel like they didn't truly get their happy ending. Despite that, I love this story and root for them anyway. If you ever decide to add a chapter know that you have one reader who will definitely be there for it.

It may have been over 4 years since you last posted, but I'm not giving up hope! I re-read this story every once in a while because it's so darned good!

I absolutely love this fic! I hope one day you can come back and finish it, or maybe even sketch out a HEA. Thank you for writing 3 Hope you're doing well!

I loved the authors note 4 this chapter, u & others make sure the reader knows you & that's not something all authors do & I think they should I mean u don't have to get too personal but, let everyone know that they mean a lot to u bc they read ur ff js

Yes it's green food coloring no health concerns needed lol

I have agree with u a,timer of coffee coffee pot is wonderful now they née to make the coffee pot that u can program to mix cream & sugar so u don't have to mix it urself rotfl

Well, I knew this was unfinished when I started reading it so it's no one's fault but my own that I'm now dying for an update of a story that hasn't had one in years. I know life can get downright crazy. I know sometimes our interests wax and wane. I just hope no matter what has taken you away from this story for so long, that some day you come back to it. It's really wonderful. Even if you can only manage a chapter or two to get through family drama and then sketch out their HEA for us. Though I have wondered if your original plans included Rose/Emmett and Jasper/Alice. Man, I'd love to see her lose her shit with his parents. I've really wanted to meet his grandpa. I've wanted to know more about the Tanya situation and worried about whether she would be an issue or not. I've wondered about his contract and her job. I really hope that no matter what they stay strong and handle it together...I don't love too much angst. But most importantly I wanna say that I'm really thankful for what is here. It's amazing and I'm so happy people like you take the time to share your talent with all of us. I'm sorry this is my only comment, I just plowed right through without stopping because I just couldn't help it. But I have added this to my favorites list, and I WILL read it again. So when I do I'll make sure to stop and point out the things I loved about each chapter. I hope life is good, wherever it has taken you.

Just found this- and I really like how you portray the characters and gave them depth. Thanks for sharing your ideas and stories. I hope everything is well in your life.

I honestly cannot even remember the last time I logged in to leave a review on ANY story, but I had to for this one. I am absolutely obsessed with the relationship between your Edward and Bella, and I sincerely hope that you plan on continuing to write the rest of the story. I’ve never once considered an elopement to be something that I’d want to do one day, but yours was the most romantic wedding I’ve ever read — just wow! I plan on downloading this to my kindle so that I can read-read. :)